Date: May 29, 2008 01:02 pm Title: Epilogue
:D Jim and Pam are getting married! And they would have a fun time. Because its Jim and Pam!
Sweet
Author's Response: Thank you for all three of your reviews! They were awesome. This is one of my older fics and I went back and read through it the other day before adding the last chapter and noticed the things you suggested. Man, my writing has improved greatly! I'm embarrassed with my older stories now! haha! But I'm thrilled to know that you found this fic fun to read! It was surprisingly fairly tough to write! Thanks again for your reviews!
Date: May 29, 2008 12:53 pm Title: Oh, what a gentleman!
Strange, the link isn't working (for me at least)
I'm going to a wedding in about two months. While I know I am going to get all fancy pretty for it, certainly a Jim to make it worth while would make it better. Haha
The Great Escape is a great song!
Curious as to why they would ride back with Phyllis and Bob when they drove over there themselves...
Date: May 29, 2008 11:14 am Title: Love Peacocks
"took a walk by the Wallempaumpack"
I've never heard it phrased "the Wallenpaumpack" ... wouldn't it make more sense as "took a walk by LAKE Wallem" instead of the?
"why, hello pam beesly!" I can totally hear Jim sayin that!
Karen and ROY? Haha!
Random - but I was looking at this challenge earlier and thinking it would be good (but sadly, since we know the state of Kevin and Stacey, never could happen).
I know I have issues with this also, but you may want to use contractions more. Such as "I will" seems to be better said I'll in this chapter. Its minor, and I have trouble with it also, but its somethin to watch out for. Because its more conversational.
Date: May 27, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Love Peacocks
My jaw litteraly dropped! You are a really good writer!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so so much! That's really awesome of you to say! Those few words you wrote caused a big smile to spread across my face, seriously!
Date: May 26, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Epilogue
Congrats on finishing this. I forgot about this story. I can't wait to see how you end Blackout and I have been waiting for more on your other stories.
Author's Response: I've had a lot of things keeping me away from fan fic but now I should have more time to get back on track! I've begun writing a new story but I won't be posting on it until I finish my other ones.
Date: October 30, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Don't Go Breakin' My Heart
glad you took some of my suggestions and used them. Now this chapter really has some bite to it... and also a more normal response to being kissed like that.
Author's Response: i'm glad that i took your advice. you have many great ideas and i'm glad to take them (: i'm not sure if you are willing, but if you are, i desperatly need a beta, and you would be a great one if you are up for it. if you are, just email me at rawrrxxmattie@aim.com
Date: October 30, 2007 11:58 am Title: Don't Go Breakin' My Heart
When i saw that you had written a new chapter i was uber happy. What you did with having Karen and Roy show up together was brilliant... but i was not expecting that whole Roy grabbing Pam and kissing her thing, or the Karen and Jim one.
What i would have really liked to see was Pam slap Roy and then have Jim say something a little cold to Karen something along the lines of her being a bitch. I know we all think Jim and Pam are too nice to do those things, but come on they are human and we all have moments where the rage and anger is too much that we lash out in mean ways.
But i really enjoyed it and can't wait to see where Pam and Jim have gone too and what you are going to make them do next.
Author's Response:
now that you speak of that, i completley agree (: i just got through watching liscense to wed for my first time and i can see what you mean. like at the beginning ben seemed like an easygoing guy but he punched the revrend.
i'm going to actually add that (:
9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Oh, what a gentleman!
very cute! I could picture Dwight checking the pews.
Please i need to know how this ends
Author's Response:
i'm going to try and get the rest up this weekend [:
thanks for the feedback!
Date: October 02, 2007 08:57 am Title: Love Peacocks
I'm loving it already. I can't to read about the wedding.
Author's Response: thank you for that kindd feedbackk !! [: i`m going to try and write part two noww !!
8 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2007 06:56 am Title: Love Peacocks
I'm so happy! I've been waiting for someone to answer my challenge. Looking forward to more : )
Author's Response: thank you !! i'm going to start writing part 2 as soon as i can !! i hope it will turn out well ;; thank you for the kind words !!