Date: November 13, 2007 09:22 pm Title: TTYL
gah!! damn it! i hope you finish this before i go to NYC for 5 days!! :( soo good. you're the best hon!
Date: November 13, 2007 05:38 pm Title: WTG!!!!
This story is like heroin for me. I am addicted. I should be working on a major essay but i had to come and read this.
I loved it. Just as revealing as Pam on the beach. I can't believe that the chapter ended. I really can't wait to read the rest of this story,hopefully Jim's half comes soon.
Date: November 13, 2007 05:30 pm Title: WTG!!!!
YAY!!! Go pam! I felt like pampong... YOU TELL HIM PAM!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I feel... so... involved in this story. Its great!
Date: November 13, 2007 04:53 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Oh my goodness. Words can't express the strange squealing noises this chapter has drawn out of me. I don't know how you do it but I am so invested in this story, more than I usually am with fics. I'll try and pick some of my favourite parts but it's going to be difficult to choose:
TeamJim has entered Office_Chat/TheAnnex
It’s amazing how those words change the entire dynamic in the room. It’s as if he’s physically there among them…like when you’re talking about someone when they suddenly appear. A hush descends on the screen. No words move. The white screen goads her into saying something…into saying anything.
Words cannot express how happy his appearance made me. Seriously fangirl moment. The description of its aftermath as well, is completely spot on. Brilliant.
And maybe it’s for the best if you leave Scranton, I don’t know if we can fix any of this, but I sure as hell would like to try and I'd like to think that the guy I know...that I've known and...and loved would like to give it a try too.
Oh I'm so proud of Pam :) Her little rant was brilliant, it felt very organic to read, as though she really was just blurting it out without much thought. It jumps around like it should and it's so very Pam.
Fantastic :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 04:27 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Don't worry about reviews right now - finish that next chapter!! :-D
Awesome, GITC!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 04:06 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Whoops! That review should have been for WTG!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 04:05 pm Title: TTYL
ACK! Jerk!Jim makes me cringe every time. But an excellent chapter! I can't wait for Jim's response.
Date: November 13, 2007 03:14 pm Title: WTG!!!!
It is very impressive how you inter-lace the real office story with this alternate version of events - which hopefully come to the same conclusion. Very nicely done.
Date: November 13, 2007 03:03 pm Title: TTYL
Mrh! I've been reading this and I have to save Amazing!!! I keep checking MTT all the time for updates.... excellent job.
Date: November 13, 2007 02:21 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Wow! That was really really good! I hate how you've left it there though!
Ooh, Jim. What will he say!?
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 01:51 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Ugh. This is like torture. The kind that involves silk. Jesus, woman, you're fuckin' KILLING me over here.
Date: November 13, 2007 01:46 pm Title: WTG!!!!
I know you just posted this, but... MORE! :)
Date: November 13, 2007 01:37 pm Title: WTG!!!!
You enjoy torturing me, don't you? Just admit it already. ;-)
Date: November 13, 2007 01:30 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Oh holy smokes, Beach Games in the chat room. I had to double check and see if SweaterGirl was whispering or not. Holy carp.
BTW -- I can wait for replies to reviews, I'd prefer more story if I have a choice ;o)
Date: November 13, 2007 01:17 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Omggg this was the best chapter yet! I was a big pile of squee. You are amazing for the way you've let this drag out-- in a good way! It's painful but painfully awesome.
Date: November 13, 2007 01:09 pm Title: WTG!!!!
awesome! can't wait to read more!
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 01:05 pm Title: BFFs
"They pretend to be themselves until long after midnight."
That line says it all - from Casino Night up until Beach Games. It's that angst that keeps us feeling for their relationship.
Date: November 13, 2007 01:02 pm Title: WTG!!!!
ROCK ON, GodinthisChilis. I hold up my lighter (that is, I would if I had one, but using the cell phone instead is lame, so pretend there is a lighter) as I absorb the awesomeness of your writing. I'm loving these chapters, and I just can't wait for these two to close their laptops, take off their gloves, and do it all in person (not do it all, though that would be cool; I mean do it all as in say what they need to say, not do each other or...I'm saying a lot of things).
Keep it up, m'dear, and I'm already on tenterhooks for the next chapter!! -CH
Date: November 13, 2007 12:36 pm Title: WTG!!!!
I can understand why you chose to end at that point but it doesn't make it easy!!!!!! : ) Eeeeexcellent chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 12:34 pm Title: WTG!!!!
what a great chapter! keep up the good work! i cant wait for the next chapter! hopefully its soon b/c today is the most boring day at work!
<3
Date: November 13, 2007 12:31 pm Title: WTG!!!!
Heavens to Betsy! That was difficult to read (in a good way)!
I loved this sentiment: And there it is…in black and white. It’s real now. No more pretending. No more lies. And the big reveal doesn't come in a sweeping, violin-tinged moment of realization.
It's just perfect, and now I can't wait to hear Jim's POV. Great job, as always!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 12:26 pm Title: WTG!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you stopped there. No wait, I can, cuz yer evil and stuff...lol
Please update soon! It's such an amazing story.
Nekkidity wouldn't hurt either, but I'm willing to overlook it if you don't. teehee
Date: November 12, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Email II
*broken brain* WHY JIM?!?!?! WHY DID YOU CLOSE THAT EMAIL ADDRESS?!?!?!
Hey, this whole shutting down of production was really interesting. Where ever did you find the inspiration for that point? :-P
I jest. Not well(broken brain and all), but I jest.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 12:34 pm Title: Email II
First of all, add me to the list of Those Who Registered Just to Review This Story.
And second of all -- OH MY GOD. That last e-mail ripped my heart out. And the thing I loved about this chapter was that it wasn't just Jim and Pam e-mailing, which I expected. It was Brian to Pam, Pam to Michele, Oscar to Pam, Jim to Ted, and of course, the heart-wrenching final e-mail. This story has to be one of my favorites, ever. Thank you for the loyalty you show your readers by constantly updating, and thank you for creating such an amazing, realistic, and crazay good fic. :)
Date: November 12, 2007 09:49 am Title: Email II
Oh, my god, that last e-mail made me gasp. You're tearing my heart out here!
I LOVED Oscar's initial e-mail and loved their list of ways to subvert the cameras. You're very inventive!
I can't wait to read the rest!!