Date: November 16, 2007 09:49 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Aww, sigh. That was so great. Now I can't wait to reread the whole thing again. Love the Dr. J reference!
Don't sell yourself short, Mel. In this fandom you're right up there in the "rock star" category. Love your stories, and looking foward to your next one.
Date: November 16, 2007 09:39 am Title: Squee!!!!!
i really enjoyed this story... great ending... basically just awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 09:37 am Title: Squee!!!!!
i <3 you. and this story. perfect ending. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 09:26 am Title: TTYL
Oh, and DUDE!!! YOU DID over 50,000 words in less than 30 days!!! Screw NANOWRIMO! You're the SHIT!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 09:24 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Jesus, woman, you knocked this fucking thing out of the park. And you call ME a rockstar?! (giggle) Damn, I'm just floored. We really have to do the Jim/Pam livejournal thing together when my work settles down a little. Bow, scrape, bow, scrape.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 09:20 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Squee indeed! I must decree that this story is tummy-achingly good (yes, that's a good thing! your words are so real and intense that it causes me physical discomfort, and i wouldn't have it any other way!! hehe)
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 09:13 am Title: Squee!!!!!
What an absolutely perfect ending. I'm feeling so happy right now. All is right with the world : ) Now if the strike would only end...
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 06:05 am Title: FTW!!
Aww sweet! Really good ending.
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 08:04 pm Title: FTW!!
Wow, I just love your stories! I guess you'll need a little break after you wrap up this one with the epilogue but I hope the writing bug bites you again soon!
Date: November 15, 2007 07:36 pm Title: FTW!!
How cute! But I'm seriously sad it's over :C
Date: November 15, 2007 06:49 pm Title: FTW!!
Great way to wrap it up (almost)! I loved how you incorporated some of Pam's 'The Job' dialogue while keeping it true to your story. Love this!
9 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 05:58 pm Title: FTW!!
Kudos on using some of the most touching and true dialougue from the Office universe i.e. all of Tim's U.K. stuff. I just LOVE those talking heads. Can't believe it's the end!! Great job!
Date: November 15, 2007 05:36 pm Title: FTW!!
great story!
i loved the ending.
I can just picture Jim standing there waving
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 03:55 pm Title: TTYL
Way to go! LOVED it. You tied everying in so well.
Date: November 15, 2007 03:36 pm Title: FTW!!
Most definitely for the win! Love it, so much! You meld the actual aspects of the show and your storyline so well.
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 03:06 pm Title: FTW!!
such a perfect, perfect ending. this story was such a pleasure to read, amazing job :)
Date: November 15, 2007 03:01 pm Title: FTW!!
FTW indeed. This was just wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
I'm dead now, but what a way to go. Bravo!
Date: November 15, 2007 02:20 pm Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}
Have I mentioned how much you rock? I wonder how many other people went with that obvious line to open their reviews? I should be more original but you rock sums it up. This was, as ever, brilliant. I could copy and paste but there's too much I love. I particularly love the beginning because Jim's reaction is just so freaking spot on how it should be. You can feel all the emotions passing through him in that little passage. And the end, it's frustrating and incomplete and exactly how these sorts of conversation do go. So perfectly Jim/Pam :)
Date: November 15, 2007 01:43 pm Title: FTW!!
Things I loved about this:
"New vision can be kind of blinding and scary when you’re used to fuzzy shapes in the dark."
"Avery in Wichita asks,..." --Wichita is MY hometown! Yay!
The reference to Tim's talking head in the BBC version. Kudos :)
And that was a very sweet ending :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 01:07 pm Title: FTW!!
awwwwwwwwwww!!! This is a perfect ending to a perfect story. Well done! This is definately one of my favourite stories ever!
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 01:07 pm Title: FTW!!
Oh man oh man oh man. The ending was great -- the way you worked in actual dialog and made it work so well in this different story. And Pam's keyboard gibberish = perfect reaction. This made me grin for awhile. Hm, wish I had something insightful to say here but... well, good job. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 01:00 pm Title: FTW!!
I LOVE YOU. *whispers* I think I might like your S3 ending than the canon one. But shh!! Don't tell the writers!
Date: November 15, 2007 12:50 pm Title: FTW!!
Le sigh. Love the 'chat room' version of 'The Job'. This whole fic has been so freaking great.
I really love the angle about the story not ending there. That's how I'm trying to think of it now that we're going to be out of new episodes for a while. Le pout.
Date: November 15, 2007 12:47 pm Title: FTW!!
Whew. MAN, that was good. I knew you would revert back to canon and have Jim ask Pam out, but I wanted to see how you made that happen without totally taking it from the show. And I wasn't disappointed, not at all.
I'll save the emotional review for the epilogue. But let me just say now that this is the best thing, ever. For realsies.