7 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 05:09 pm Title: The Setup
I wrote a nice review but my stupid new comptuer has a mind of its own and it totally disappeared. Basically I said I'm enjoying this even though S3 angst is not a place I like to revisit, but you write it so well that I just know it will be good.
Author's Response: Awww, stupid computer! ;-) Thanks kaystar, that is such a nice compliment!
Date: October 14, 2007 02:27 pm Title: The Setup
Just the kind of thing I LOVE. Angst.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I love angst too! Trust that it will get angstier :)
Date: October 14, 2007 01:46 pm Title: The Setup
Great set up chapter! I really loved that episode, especially the ending, so I'm excited to see where this goes now ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn :) I hope you like what comes next.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 12:48 pm Title: The Setup
love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Donnelly!
Date: October 14, 2007 12:45 pm Title: The Setup
Loves it so far. I always wondered if the two of them would be waiting for Dwight at the bottom of the building. I mean it would be weird if they didn't wait for the pay off of their prank.
Author's Response: I completely agree, PC. Thanks for the review :)
Date: October 14, 2007 10:42 am Title: The Setup
“So, Halpert… where’s my present?” she asks.
Jim feels a sudden twisting in his gut, and he stutters for some sort of an excuse.
Gah! I also loved when Pam is teasing Jim about knowing Dwights number by heart. I love that this is what we don't see on ABC and can we just assume this is what happens? Please? :D And the ending? They've def. got to go now. Love it!! I'm so glad you're writing again shan! Let me know if you ever need help ;) Great job and I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thanks WBJ! You know that I love any feedback that you give! I'll email you what I've got for chapters 2 and 3 to see what you think :)
Date: October 14, 2007 10:01 am Title: The Setup
So, I don't know that I ever fully expressed how much I love this plot. You have a great way of coming up with these scenarios that I (I'd guess most others as well, but you know what happens when you assume...) read and say 'YES! That is what was supposed to have happened next! The writers obviously just lost those last 20 pages or so.' You're doing a great job of keeping in character with the interaction that Jim and Pam had going on circa mid-S3. Just awesome. I can't wait to see the next part!!!
Author's Response:
I totally forgot to thank you and uncgirl for beta'ing! That is now corrected. Jeeze, I suck.
And thank you! I hate it when the writers lose pages!
Date: October 14, 2007 09:48 am Title: The Setup
Oh, this is so good, and I'm so glad it's not a oneshot. I like that they don't say much, and I especially like seeing Jim encounter Karen's 'you should date!' thing. And him knowing Dwight's number by heart? Excellent touch. Excited to see where it'll go.
Author's Response: Thanks Ardens :) When I was watching the episode I was just waiting for Karen to pop up and say something to Jim about Pam and Roy. But it didn't happen so I decided to make it happen. Hee!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2007 09:44 am Title: The Setup
This is such a great start! The characterization, dialogue, all ring perfectly true. And I love the premise. I can't wait to see where you go with the rest of it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope when you see Dwight next chapter you think he's in character because I had so much fun writing him!
Date: October 14, 2007 09:40 am Title: The Setup
Very fun chapter! It's great to go back to these moments now that we know we have real live fluff to watch! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! You should have chapter two tomorrow or Tuesday :)