Date: October 16, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really cute! I love the note the best ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh! I love this one SO much! Excellent job. If you were a real person and this wasn't a computer screen I would air-high-5 you!
Really impressive stuff, especially for a first go. I love the hug - seems more genuine than a kiss.
More chapters? Please?
Date: October 16, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
kisses are good, but when you eally think about it, hugs are just a tnsy bit better.
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
The hug was perfect. Like starting all over again from the time of the merger. Very impressive for you first fanfic.
Date: October 16, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it. i definitely like the hug because this is before all the questions are answered and everything is easy. but it's still loving and sweet. anyway, there are a lot of things i like about this like the attention to detail and his desire to make this special but make her laugh. it's a GREAT first fic!!!
Date: October 16, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
The hug was perfect! I think you made the right choice. This story is so sweet and so JAM. Nicely done!
Date: October 16, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. I truly did. Great job. My heart skipped a beat when I read this line:
Upon seeing him a huge smile spread across her face, which made him grin, as it always did. He loved her. Everything about her.
THAT made me grin. This was a nice little look in to the before and after of Jim's "it's a date". Well done!