10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 08:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Hot in a creepy, terrible way. I want to smack Pam so badly that I can taste it. The plot sort of made me want to cry, but the writing was awesome. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks, proposals! Yeah, it is creepy. And pushes the outer limits of character for Pam. But we all push the limits of our character in regards to sex, I think. ;)
Date: August 26, 2006 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic. You always manage to update so that I have something to read when I just wake up. And this? What a way to start my morning.
Mmm. Transitive property, indeed. :)
Author's Response: Hee, thanks! ;)
9 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2
This was so good (hot!) and it pissed me off so much at Pam. She's using them both at this point. At least she's getting off, though! Heh.
Author's Response: Yeah, she totally teased Jim all day, thinking she was letting him in on something. Thanks, nqllisi! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 05:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Whew...is it hot in here? That was amazing. Poor Jim is missing out on all this great sex that he's almost a part of.
Author's Response:
Poor Jim :( But It may work for him eventually if it brings Pam up to speed :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 04:51 am Title: Chapter 2
"She wants him to know what he did to her last night when she didn't know it was him.
She wants him to know what he's going to do to her tonight now that she does know."
you're fantastic. glad you're continuing this :)
Author's Response: Thank you, yippee!
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 04:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Jesus.
That's all I can think to say at the moment. :)
Author's Response: That's enough ;) Thanks, xoxoxo!
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 02:24 am Title: Chapter 2
HOT. What a unique way to have Pam have sex with Jim without actually having sex with Jim. Do you plan to continue this any further?
Author's Response: I'm considering it, but I'm not sure where to go next. Jim's POV the day after Vday? I'm thinking of starting a new series of fantasies. Hmmm...
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 01:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Holy crap. *is dead*
Seriously, it is brilliant how you worked what we saw in the Valentine's Day episode to explain Jim's behaviour that day. My hat's off to you!
Author's Response: Thank you, Morning Angel :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 01:26 am Title: Chapter 2
HOT DAMN!!!! I just finished reading the first chapter moments ago! Are you trying to kill me!!! Oh my....I'm just trying to make complete sentences!
Holy hell...this was incredibly hot! This part especially: "She wants him to know what he's going to do to her tonight now that she does know."
*fans self* Ok, seriously, you are the Queen of erotic yet classy, smut. Lol!
Author's Response: Thanks, aggiegurl! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1
NOTE: sorry for the double review! My internet cut out and I didn't know it went through, plus I changed one thing. I'm a total clutz! Oh well!
Author's Response: No problem :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I had my hand over my mouth this ENTIRE fic! I would say out loud: "No, oh no. Damn! Oh wow, no, no." Lol, I even said some of the things Jim thought! This was a total ouchfest for Jim but I enjoyed it! (the story, that is...ahem) ;) Great job!
Author's Response: It's like being reviewed by twins. Heh.
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I had my hand over my mouth this ENTIRE fic! I would say out loud: "No, oh no. Damn! Oh wow, no, no." Lol, I even said some of the things Jim thought! This was a total ouchfest for Jim but I enjoyed it! (no double-meaning intended) ;) Great job!
Author's Response: Hee, awesome, aggiegurl! ;D
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK, no fair making Roy complex and emotional. No - he is to be a one-dimensional complication with whom we do away post-haste....a harmless oaf, if you will. I refuse to be manipulated into seeing him as a person with feelings! What can you possibly be thinking?
Really enjoyed this - the awkward was great, Jim is true to character, but Roy....way too complex, seriously. ;)
Author's Response: Heh, thanks, Geinnob ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, love the timing of the story and why VDay night Pam was going to get the "best sex of her life". If she only knew....
And by having them watch a Mavs game and have Jim say my last name (even though he is talking about where to sit)--well, this fic is just one big Boof shout out! Which is exactly what you had in mind, I'm sure. Hee... Rumor has it there will be a chapter 2--can't wait!
Seriously, very good. I
Author's Response:
A peek at my dorkiness: I looked up the NBA schedule for 2/13/2006, and chose the Knicks/Mavs game 'cause I figured it'd be playing in the Scranton market. Then I analyzed the box scores for the dialogue. Yes. I love you all that much.
Glad you got so many personal perks in this one, Boof! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay...can I print this out and give it to my boyfriend as an educational tool???
Author's Response: You bet! Good luck with that ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Best conversation ever!!! Totally fits with the episode.
Author's Response: Thanks, samsmom! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved the conversation about the internship. Maybe it is Pam holding herself back and not Roy. I mean we really only get her version of things. Never from Roy's point of view. Hmmm, interesting.
As for the sex talk...damn. That was awkward and weird and kinda hot. I never would have thought that Roy wouldn't know the basics in pleasing Pam, but it would be no surprise that Jim know's what he's talking about.
And Jim allegedly getting kicked? Too funny.
Author's Response: Re: the internship, glad you got what I was doing there. Thanks, hireath! ;)
Date: August 25, 2006 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Um. Awk!Weird! I enjoyed this, although I had to keep skipping along, like when you cover your eyes watching a movie that's just too embarassing.
Author's Response: That mental image is awesome ;) Thanks, tonightyourghost ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Dude. Duuuuude.
That was hilarious and awkward and sad and very, very educational.
And I really dug how how you showed Roy's side of the internship thing.
The tiara is coming in the mail, my friend, because you are the queen of fanfic!
Author's Response:
Dude, thanks! (practicing that silly parade wave) You're the first person to mention Roy's side of the internship story. I really wanted you guys to be able to watch Boys & Girls again, and see not Roy telling her no to the internship, but no to making the decision for her. It's arguable - he's thoughtless enough elsewhere, but I the thought that Pam fibbed a little to Jim intrigued me. Thanks, Beth! ;)
7 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. As jon stewart would say, "Awwwwkward." But it was great at the same time. And man, that must have been torture for Jim.
Now I want to see the follow up, where Pam finds out Jim gave Roy that advice. How embarrassing....
Author's Response:
Yay for Jon Stewart! A follow-up, eh? It's and intriguing thought... Thanks, mixedberries ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god. It's so very Jim to be a big softie and help Roy like that. And it's hot that this implies that he's great in bed, haha. I'm not sure why, but I laughed until tears at "What the fuck?" This was so creepy, but great too. Nice.
Author's Response:
Awesome, thanks, proposals! ;)
Date: August 25, 2006 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. I have to say that I really enjoyed this. The dialogue was perfectly awkward enough to make me squirm in my seat, and it made me feel for Roy at the same time. Nice job.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, cocare2001! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God. I. Can. Not. Stop. Laughing.
Oh my God!
Author's Response: Hee :)
Date: August 25, 2006 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah!!! What a fantastic way for me to wake up today. Everything I ever dreamed that this conversation would be is here. And and and- The way you fit this in with the show was so absolutely perfect and now whenever I watch Valentine's Day, I'll know that it's really Jim giving her the best sex of her life. (transitive property, right? sort of?)
And, God, Roy telling him, "She's pretty loud when she likes something." And it was just so deliciously awkward, yet so, so, so hot.
Seriously. Your Roy stays perfectly in character and it didn't seem strange for him to be talking to Jim about this at all. That moment where he turns vulnerable. Aw.
I'm so glad you wrote this. I could never have done it. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)
Author's Response: Woo-hoo! Glad you liked it :D And, yes, transitively, Jim's giving her the business. And also, you get the special Dorky Comment Award just for using the phrase "transitive property" - I kind of love you for it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
oh. my. god. this was horrible and fantastic. i could practically hear the whole thing in my head, which was all kinds of awkward & kinda hot...
now i'm just confused. but in a good way :)
Author's Response: Awesome, yippee ;)