Date: October 23, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this. its so.... gah, its so sweet and suc a nice reflection and its so much what i think would be true and .... wow!
Date: October 23, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I like how they melt into an embrace at the end!
Good job!
8 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely. I really liked the part after Pam left the conference room. You just know they would have reacted that way and what a perfect ending that would have been to that scene. Great job.
8 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Simply stunning. Thank you.
7 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really great. except for one thing. I'm confused about the cab thing because in The Job Jim & Karen drove to the city and we saw Jim driving himself back to Scranton.
But I really loved how you got into his head. Great work!
Date: October 23, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooh, I liked this. Thanks so much for writing it. It goes along really well with what Jim said to Dwight in "money." great Job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was wonderful! Thanks for sharing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Her voice, her smile, the way her eyes pored into him every time she looked in his direction, the way the air was sucked from the room when she brushed him in the elevator, stayed.
I love the sense you evoke of her haunting him- because he looked tormented through all of that time. This is a very nice portrait of what he must have gone through, even as he pushed it down and aside as best he could. Brilliant job!