Date: October 28, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Jealousy or simple discomfort.
Oh, I loved the subtle way Scully played Mulder with the Jim thing - awesome!
I'm pretty intrigued by the whole "mystery" too - can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
hmm a little jealousy never hurt anybody right? ;-) Thanks for the review!! The new chapter should be up within the next two days.
Date: October 28, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Jealousy or simple discomfort.
Oooooh. I just caught up on the last three chapters. I cracked up when I realized that Mulder and Scully did talking heads! And the whole rodeo clown thing was hilarious.
Oh! And this line-- “Sometimes…You have to put a quarter in."
And Scully sort of testing Mulder with that Halpert talk. Very, very nice. Please keep it up!
Author's Response: lol thank you I'm so glad liked the jokes ;-) I've been trying to sort of balance the Office humor with the X-files humor, but it's turning into a tricky task. We'll see how it all turns out. The next chapter is pretty much done, so keep an eye out tomorrow.
Date: October 28, 2007 11:29 am Title: It's not aliens.
LOVED Scully talking to the camera! Awesome!
Author's Response: lol thank you ;-) I couldn't help but give them a chance to get a talking head in. There'll be more later, too.
Date: October 28, 2007 11:07 am Title: How They're the Same
Honestly, this is a wonderfully fun and different story. I'm totally enjoying it. And I must tell you that there are passages and THs that are soooooo on the money (like Scully awesome) and emotional that literally I had to pause at least twice, like full out pause and say to myself, "wow". So, no more worries, this is terrific and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: ugh uncgirl thank god!!! I'm so excited that you read these chapters and liked them. Despite my "I'm just going to have a good time" attitude with this one, I'm still a little dependent on my trusty beta team and what you guys think. So thanks for the comment ;-) I really appreciate it.
Date: October 28, 2007 10:54 am Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
I'm a bad and lazy fanfic reader who usually doesn't leave reviews, but I just couldn't resist leaving one for this story. It's been so long since I left a review that I forgot my password and had to get a new one sent to me in order to comment on this story. Simply put: You are an amazingly talented writer. I can't get over the gorgeous way you put these characters' thoughts and emotions into words. It's practically poetry. I love all your stories, but this one is so wonderful and unique in its execution. Both hilarious (Chapter 2's Michael impersonations and the Mulder/Scully interplay) and heart-wrenching (Chapter 3's Pam/Scully's late night thoughts of love and regret). SIGH!
Awesome! (Ok, I'll stop gushing now. Thank you for this GREAT story and for the continued OFFICE entertainment.)
Author's Response: Wow this review made my life. Seriously. Thank you so much (like I have a bit of tear in my eye...does that make me crazy??) I really appreciate you taking the time to get a new password in order to comment!!!!!!!! You should email me your favorite XF episode or something so I can give you a shout out in exchange for the wonder that is this review. Seriously, best review ever. Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm having a blast writing this one ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 11:56 pm Title: How They're the Same
Holy God am I in love with you right now. I literally did a happy dance at reading the intro to the first chapter. MSR and JAM?!!? I am so excited about this story, it's really a little ridiculous. I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
hahaha!! Thanks for this awesome review! I have more already written, i just have to edit and then post so keep your eyes peeled. MSR and JAM is so much like a dream come true that I think I'm a little over-zealous in writing it ;-) So I understand your enthusiasm. lol.
Date: October 27, 2007 10:57 pm Title: It's not aliens.
Creed's talking head kills me! I love how Michael really really wants Toby to be behind the disappearances. Poor, poor Toby! Great talking heads with Mulder and Scully! I was totally picturing X-Cops! Again, great job!
Author's Response: lol thank you!!! Yes these scenes are definitely in the X-Cops category, the whole case kind of is. Even though I promise it will get angsty eventually. Lol and thanks for loving Creed ;-)
Date: October 25, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Very nice start! You've got the characterizations down perfectly, you've balanced the mystery with the relationship stuff very well, and you've created a scenario I want to know more about. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: October 25, 2007 11:08 am Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Not weird and not worried! I really like this so far. It's a lot of fun to revisit Mulder and Scully after so long and I could picture them perfectly. I eagerly await lots of UST comparisons between them and JAM!
Author's Response:
Oh good I'm glad you're on the bandwagon of my MSR/JAM comparison ;-) Thanks for the review! More to come soon.
Date: October 25, 2007 12:15 am Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
I am completely and utterly in love with you. You have combined my two favorite TV shows of all time, and done it whist miraculously keeping everyone perfectly in character.
The Mulder and Scully dialogue was sooooo good. I mean, Mulder with the sports reference? Scully threatening to shoot Mulder? SO GOOD.
I cannot wait for you to update. *peeeeer pressure*
Author's Response: It's so funny because when I started writing this I had any fans of the X-Files in mind. I wanted to start with the Office and make it really kind of standard, just the facts, and then have Mulder and Scully enter like the stars that they are ;-) Glad you liked their dialogue!!! I'm having a blast writing this one, so there'll be an update soon. Keep reading/reviewing!
Date: October 24, 2007 11:54 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Um, XF and The Office? You just officially became my favorite author! :)
Your characterizations are spot on! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: lol thank you!!!!! Glad the characters seem real.
Date: October 24, 2007 11:36 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Ok Aiya, I just did the same thing! I spent countless hours immersing myself in MSR back in the day, and I'm an absolute sucker for JAM now - this story was too cute to resist. Keep going Stablergirl!
Author's Response: Taaaalk to me, I spent basically my entire undergrad sitting on my bed reading MSR. I wrote a little but it was not very good and I never posted anything, so consider this my contribution to the wolrd of XF fanfic. ;-) Thanks for the review!!!
Date: October 24, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Um, YAY! I really want to read more of this; I hope it's in the works.
Author's Response: It's definitely in the works. I have the case and the plot pretty much worked out, now I just have to get there ;-) Thanks for reviewing!! Keep reading and let me know what you think.
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Wow. I've been wondering which story would be the one that got me to register and review. The Office & X-Files combined was too much to withstand. Also, X-Files season 6 was my favorite, so obviously, you're awesome. Excellent start, please continue!
Author's Response: Lol yay!!! I'm so glad my story got you to register and review ;-) I couldn't resist combining my first love (xfiles) with my second (the office). And clearly sixth season XF is the best!! Thanks for the review, keep me posted on how you like the next chapters.
Date: October 24, 2007 02:54 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
the end note is a comfort. :) but i really am interested to see where everyone's going. it's really well written. you have my stamp of approval. not that that means much :)
Author's Response: Of course it means much!!! A stamp of approval from rulesofjinx is a VERY important thing ;-) Yeah, fear not...I promise that case wise it'll be more normal than it seems. Thanks for the review.
Date: October 24, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
HA! I love both fandoms and though I usually hate crossovers, this looks very cool.
Author's Response: lol thanks. Yeah I'm not usually a crossover fan either, so this should be an interesting one to write. Thanks for the review ;-)