Date: January 11, 2008 06:15 am Title: So close I can taste it...
I love this story! You write J&P very well, but I am very struck by your M&S. The season 6 vibe is spot on. And your writing is beautiful - The passages above are lyrical. I look forward to each installment and enjoy it more with each chapter. (Your style seems familiar; I'm guessing I might know you from another incarnation in XF fandom? In another incarnation, I'm a scullyfic/emuse member.) Anyway, the dinner party promise is tantalizing and I look forward to angst, insight and amusement!
Date: January 09, 2008 10:09 am Title: So close I can taste it...
Oooh, I'm very excited by the direction this is going. I love this story so much I recommended it to a couple of TWoP friends that don't even watch The Office but are huge X-Files fans. They are now so hooked they think they might start watching! So yay for Stablergirl!
Date: January 08, 2008 09:03 pm Title: So close I can taste it...
Is saying I love you coming on too strong? Lol. I don't care if this was a filler chapter I still loved it. Though I am very excited for what comes next. Mulder and Scully in this chapter was just...guh...perfect. This: "...soft...pleading...full of unshed tears that shocked him and he was reminded momentarily of hallways and bees and telling her she'd saved him..." So wonderful! It always seemed like Scully was never ready, like she was always keeping Mulder at a arms length and I love how you've shown that. Oh and Scully totally was a drill sergeant in another life...haha. So pleased with the credit you're bringing to The X-Files and The Office :)
Date: January 08, 2008 08:41 pm Title: So close I can taste it...
Yay for another transition chapter! It means that there's more good stuff to come without an ending too close in sight ;)
I LOVE the idea of Mulder and Scully having a dinner party with Pam. I am cracking up (in a good way)!
Great work with Scully in the car. I really like her needing to do it in her own time, but still letting him know that it's going to be good.
Can't wait to read what's next.
Date: January 08, 2008 08:08 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Heh. I guessed what stablergirl would like [/rocket scientist]
Author's Response:
nice. [/kevin]
Date: January 08, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
Hmm... does this help?
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y254/lisahoo/office/DSC01033.jpg
Do it for Chris!! He's out of work and dying to know how this ends up!!
Author's Response:
lmao! THAT is amazing!!! why is he sooooo good looking...?
Also, that's totally incentive. Well played, lisahoo. Well played.
10 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 05:42 pm Title: So close I can taste it...
So he just sat there and breathed in the air she was breathing out the way he’d done for years, and he convinced himself that breathing the same air as her was almost touching her, the way he’d convinced himself thousands of times before.
OK, that is a gorgeous, gorgeous line. For a "transition" chapter, a lot goes on here emotionally. I'm so glad to see a new chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope I'll have more really soon so keep reading and letting me know what you think. And thanks for the compliment on that line, I like it too ;-) (can I say that??)
Date: January 08, 2008 05:40 pm Title: So close I can taste it...
omg I kind of hate you for leaving us hanging like this! haha...not really; this story rocks and I was so excited to see this new chapter was up :) I can just imagine the delighted glint of satisfaction in Dwight's eyes when he got to cuff Trout.
Author's Response: lol oh yeah you know he LOVED that. lol. Thanks for the review, hopefully there will be more asap!
Date: January 08, 2008 04:57 pm Title: So close I can taste it...
Oh, i am so glad everyone's out of the shelter and safe! Just wanted to let you know that it was another wonderful chapter, that you're writing continues to be impeccable, and that I can't wait see Jim realise that Pam is ok. This is one of my favorite stories, please update as soon as you can!
Author's Response:
Yeah trust me, Jim finding out about Pam is riiiiight around the corner. I'm so glad you're still sticking with me on this because I know it's slow going and that sucks. Hopefully this chapter means I've worked through my writers block and will zip along to the rest. Keep your fingers crossed ;-)
Date: January 04, 2008 11:34 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Great chapter! As soon as Trout showed up I was hoping and praying for Dwight to do something. Alas the potato could not save them...though maybe if it was a beet...lol I loved the whole thing! The part with Pam stepping up was excellent and I really felt how tense it was in that room. Keep it coming! ;)
Author's Response:
a beet!!! hahaha! Thank you so much for this great review, I'm glad you could feel the tension in the air!
Date: January 02, 2008 12:09 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Oh, how I love calm, wise Pam. And Dwight. Oh, Dwight. Hee.
Author's Response:
ah yes, lol. calm wise pam and crazy overzealous dwight. Sounds perfect to me ;-)
Date: January 02, 2008 11:34 am Title: Love and War
as if it were the Delaware River Bank and he was George Washington himself
OK, for a split second I couldn't figure out why G. Washington was going to the bank. Like, to deposit a check? *sigh*
This is getting really, really good.
Date: January 02, 2008 11:23 am Title: Passing the time
He was not going to budge from this spot. Because maybe Pam would show up...because maybe she was fine...or maybe she was needing him. He licked his lips and he sniffed…And he waited.
Something about this made me teary. Oh, how these four have themselves twisted up into knots about things that should be so easy- the finding of your other half, your true self. Beautiful. And nice bonding with our girls.
Date: January 02, 2008 10:46 am Title: Psyche
Oh, no! A crazy person has Pam! Excellent.
Date: January 02, 2008 10:38 am Title: Sooner or Later
See, I was ready to accuse Jim of wearing the sweater to get a reaction...he was innocent of that, but it sure got a reaction. I love this story so much.
Date: January 02, 2008 10:21 am Title: Bagel, anyone?
Whooo. That was delightfully tense- and poor Scully, very few red-blooded straight women could have kept their hands to themselves under those circumstances. Also, Angela is acting very suspicious. Hmmm.
Date: January 02, 2008 09:57 am Title: How They're the Same
I'm enjoying all of this so much, but this chapter inspired me to start commenting. The structure, and especially the repetition of the structure, is really fantastic. It highlights the content instead of detracting from it, which is always the (tricky) goal when you use a formal structure. Nice!
Date: December 28, 2007 10:44 am Title: It's in my head, I know...
You dreaded this one? Holy crap it was awesome! You need to start writing thrillers. So suspenseful. Talk about edge-of-your-seat action. And Dwight! Both kickass and ruining everything all at the same time. Wow. This was incredible.
Author's Response: wow thank you! I'm glad the action stuff read well because yikes! It was kind of tough to write. This review totally made me thrilled! Thank you again. ;-)
Date: December 28, 2007 09:19 am Title: It's in my head, I know...
Ohhh. Guns! Hidden doors! Mulder to the rescue! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: lol yes who doesn't love those three things all tied in together?!?! Thanks for the review ;-)
Date: December 28, 2007 09:13 am Title: Love and War
Whoa. You did such a great job illustrating the despair in the quiet hours, the calm before the storm. It was intense and believable and really well written. Yay for more of this awesome story!
Date: December 27, 2007 05:49 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
AHH! Love it. Oh Dwight. I, too, hope you're still on break and able to update this soon! I'm dying here!
I don't think I ever could have imagined how these two out of my favorite shows could come together, but you've done it beautifully.
Author's Response: haha thank you! I actually thought this fic was going to be a ridiculous comedic attempt at something impossible, but it's turned into something that actually kind of works!!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I LOVE hearing from a fellow shipper ;-)
Date: December 27, 2007 03:40 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Whoa, way to step up, Beesly! I'm on the edge of my seat, so I hope you are on vacation or something where you have time to update frequently ;o)
Author's Response:
I am on vacation! But sadly writers block has introduced itself and I'm like a slow snail with the updates. but don't worry I'll try to keep on it and eventually I promise this will get wrapped up ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 03:28 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Is it odd that I'd kinda hoped that Dwight would turn out the hero?
I'm SO excited everytime I see a new chapter of this! I can't decide if I'm happy to get to the resolution or ridiculously depressed that this might end soon... But I love it and thank you for continuing to mesh my favorite worlds!
Author's Response: lol don't worry there will be probably four more chapters before things totally wrap up. I have two romances going at once, you know, so I have to pace myself ;-)
Date: December 27, 2007 03:28 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Wow, that was intense! I can't wait to see what happens now that Pam has had a near-death experience and is thinking about Jim!
Author's Response: mmmmm hmmmmm!!!!! That is going to be well worth the wait I PROMISE. I have it all planned in my head. Now...just to get it on paper...
Date: December 27, 2007 03:03 pm Title: It's in my head, I know...
Yay! Just cheering for you to keep going... can't wait for more. (And also, I suppose, pausing to vent... effing DWIGHT. Argh! Poor Pam and Mulder!)
Author's Response:
lol effing dwight indeed! I promise I am going to finish this eventually. Just stay with me ;-) I'll try to keep the updates coming.