8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 05:06 pm Title: The Cruel and Gentle Things
Wow. Jim's confession was so heartfelt and so moving and so awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh - and this was the cutest saying ever - 'Oh for the love of muppets, not today Dwight.'
8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 04:43 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings
Great job on the conversation/confrontation between Jim and Pam:
'Why now?' She repeated. He didn't respond, so she turned her back to him.
'I saw you. I saw you leave with Roy.' he said, his voice barely above a whisper.
She spun around and looked at him. 'And I've seen you with Karen. Everyday.'
'I broke up with her.' he said quietly as she walked towards the front door."
8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Pam's dream was so funny - was her shouting out about turtles a foreshadowing of the gift basket episode? I'm so glad you had Roy and Pam part amicably when he brought her home, instead of getting back together.
7 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
Phyllis' Wedding was so difficult to watch (actually almost all of S3 was difficult for me to watch!) so I am really enjoying your take on it. I'm glad your Jim broke up with Karen now instead of dragging it on.
Date: October 28, 2007 08:07 am Title: The Cruel and Gentle Things
Oh, I'm so excited! Good stuff! The last line with Michael was *HI*larious!
Date: October 28, 2007 08:04 am Title: The Cruel and Gentle Things
Haha, I really like the ending. Way to lighten the mood a bit!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 04:52 am Title: The Cruel and Gentle Things
wow. this story is like crack! lol. this chapter was great! i'm dying to know what happens!!!
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 11:25 am Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings
It's Jim. I mean, great story. Look forward to more.
9 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 08:43 am Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings
Keep going! I'm on the edge of my seat!
10 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 10:28 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings
ooo, this is getting so good!
Date: October 26, 2007 07:32 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings
Yay! It's getting to the good part--hehe (Well, the whole thing is the good part)! So well written. Very, very nice. I love it.
Date: October 26, 2007 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Yes! I was so happy to see you'd updated. Great second chapter. I love Michael/Jim moments, and you did it so well! It didn't need to longer; perfect as is. You're instincts were right there.
9 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 07:29 am Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Great job. Can't wait for the next installment!
Date: October 25, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Ahhh! So cruel to leave it there! Write. More. Now.
Please?
9 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
I love how, when you least expect it, Michael can be so intuitive, so oddly in touch with a situation that he actually has moments where he seems like a normal person. :) I find moments like that, with Michael so touching. :)
And now. Pam has answered the door. What's going to happen?? Great job!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
I wanted to review before I move on to the next chapter. I'm so excited to see where this is heading. This was such a painful episode to watch. I felt Pam's loneliness, I felt Jim's wounded expression seeing her leave with Roy. You've got me hooked. :)
Date: October 25, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
really nice story
I love AUs and this is one of my faves
Date: October 25, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
ooh, please continue. I like the beginning, it looks interesting!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
Oo, great start! Can't wait to read more!
Date: October 25, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
Nice job! I'm really excited to read more of this. You also write the characters really well, especially the inner angst bits. :-)
Keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you kindly. :)rn*back to work on story*
Date: October 25, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
Awesome start. I don't get into many of the series-typ fics, but I'm definately looking forward to the continuation of this one. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you guys seem to be enjoying it so far. :)
Date: October 25, 2007 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places
Please please continue with this. This is total fantasy fulfillment for me. I've been waiting for this subject matter to be handled in the way it seems like you are going to handle it. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feed off of feedback, so it means a lot to me. :)