Date: January 13, 2017 07:52 am Title: Ohmygawd!
This was hilarious!
Some of my favorite parts...
Michael buys a "puppet that looks like Ryan when he wanted to be a ventriloquist"
"Angela pulled her head out of her notes, eyes skimming the area, and her face looking like a peeved off Persian."
Jims whole convo with Andy.
And the end, definitely the end. I'm assuming they are buying a puppy :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2008 05:09 pm Title: Ohmygawd!
I love it!
It is really funny, please keep writing it, I would love to know what happens.
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Cold Open
This is like the awesomest awesome blossom there ever was.
You write all of the characters so wonderfully. Seriously...you've got all of them down. I laughed out loud a few times reading this. I love it and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Ohmygawd!
haha, this chapter was awsome! "did you just sing porno music into m ear?" so funny! can't wait to read to rest!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Ohmygawd!
Please.
Continue.
This.
I love it!
Date: November 01, 2007 05:41 am Title: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?
Well you know what? I don't really like candy corn, but I love this story. Grilled cheese? Thats genius! Update soon please! :D
Date: October 31, 2007 11:31 pm Title: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?
Still loving the dialogue. Really feels like an episode.
Can't wait to learn what's up with PB&J!
Date: October 31, 2007 11:26 pm Title: Cold Open
This is really fun so far. I think Jim and Pam's costumes are perfectly understated, but clever, like them.
I also think the dialogue is quite good: faced paced and funny.
But, even with his affinity for Battlestar Galactica, I hope we learn why Dwight would dress like a girl!
Nice work!
Date: October 31, 2007 07:43 pm Title: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?
"You a Browncoat too"
um...Yup. Among other things. Many other things. Teevee is my friend.
Author's Response: Shiny. I'm a ficwriter over at fff.net (using a different handle), so it's sweet to see another Browncoat in a non-Firefly setting.rnrnPlus you might dig something else later in this story.....
8 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Cold Open
This was really nice! The whole baby think caught me off guard. But how did Angela know? Well update soon, cause I want to find out! It's great so far! Yay!
Date: October 31, 2007 02:41 pm Title: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?
Ha. Enjoying it. Spent awhile trying to fully pronounce "Imaginatory… ily" in my head...nice Michaelish word.
One little nit to pick: the baby isn't Boomer's--it's Sharon's, or Athena's. Yeah, they're the same cylon model, but the show differentiates between the two of them, and I think Dwight would too.
(I guess this is where I'm supposed to hang my head in embarrassment over my dorkdom, but a) not ashamed; BSG is awesome and I have long since made peace with my obsessive fannish nature, and b) I'm posting this at a fanfic site, so....yeah.)
Author's Response: Wow, that is a level of precisness that is amazing. Thanks, and no head hanging! nice to see some BSG love out there. As dorky as Dwight is to have Starbuck's flight suit, while I wrote it I was thinking 'It would be frakkin awesome to be Thrace for Halloween.' Lol.rnrnNow I feel dorky for asking, but, your handle. Kaywinnit? You a Browncoat too or am I just overstepping my geek line?
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Cold Open
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
I can totally see this happening. Sure you're not an actual writer for the show and you're giving us some spoilery goodness? No? Darn.......
Author's Response: Me? A script writer? That's a sweet thought but I'm just TheRabbit, who spends way too much time in her own imagination.
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 06:04 am Title: Cold Open
I absolutely love it! Big smiles make for a happier Halloween : )
Date: October 30, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Cold Open
Oh man! I LOST IT at Michael's talking head. Seriously- my roommate thinks I'm nuts! Great opening. Can't wait to read more!
Date: October 30, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Cold Open
Lordy, i was cracking up the whole time i read that (:
everything about it was hilarious, and i could really see it being put on the show!
Date: October 30, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Cold Open
You aren't going to believe this, but the first draft of the Halloween story I just posted had a scene where Michael pretends to rob the office with a fake gun. I'm not kidding! I took it out because it just wasn't working with the rest of my story. I see now that it fits much better here. And the additional information of Michael pretending to be OJ? Well, that's way better than what I originally had.
Nice job!