Date: July 10, 2021 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
OUCH. But I love the juxtaposition of Pam's fantasies and the cold reality she's refused to acknowledge, and the wedding v. Casino Night/man she tells herself she loves v. man she really loves parallels. It's really well constructed.
Author's Response: I had entirely forgotten this one! It’s a fun tiny thing isn’t it? Thank you!
Date: October 14, 2009 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was incredible. so much in so little. i love how we think at first one thing, but then it happens to be another. great writing style - very intriguing!
Author's Response: Old story, and old comment, but I still check! Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Date: July 16, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, I almost cried with this one. It was almost right, except it was all wrong. But it will be right again soon. I know it. (the riht being marriage. cause obviously they are already together, so that part of right is already right!)
Author's Response:
Yep, they are well on their way to making everything right again. And thank goodness their friendship didn't really end, it just took a detour.
Date: December 15, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
well, i'm not good at complimenting technical aspects of fanfics...so all i can say is... i LOVED it! :P
Author's Response: Thank you! Getting an emotional response is really my goal. I appreciate your appreciation! :)
Date: January 13, 2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that's *good.* Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: September 15, 2006 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, this made me cry. Which is a compliment. Bittersweet and lovely.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Sorry about the tears, though!
Date: September 02, 2006 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Unh. Love the parallel style here. Fantastic. So much with so little. The Angela in me loves your efficiency ;)
Author's Response: I'm trying to learn that less is more- something you are very good at! Thank you.
Date: September 02, 2006 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Very powerful mini-fic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: August 28, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
So very sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Sorry.
Date: August 27, 2006 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a beautiful, sad, strong punch in the gut. loved the structure.
Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry about your gut.
Date: August 27, 2006 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
"She was radiant, but her dress was lavender-blue." *Sniff*
I know they're not real, but how sad would it be for these people to not even be friends? Guh.
Author's Response: I'm holding out for "happily-ever-after" myself, but this just hit me. Yeah, it would be an awful loss.
Date: August 26, 2006 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just died a little inside. That was so sad, yet so beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Sorry about the dying, though.
Date: August 26, 2006 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't expect it to end like it did. So very sad. Unless their friendship ended because they are now lovers? No? That's not what you meant? Sigh...
Author's Response: I'm usually an optimist, but the angst got the better of me this time...
Date: August 26, 2006 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww...that's so sad. Great parallelism!
Author's Response: Thank you. It made me sad, too.