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Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2008 02:03 pm Title: "So This is Your Plan?

Ok so I haven't really been on this website in awhile and right now I was just bored and decided to see if any of my favorite stories had been updated and here you are at the top of the recent stories list. Lol! Another great update. Action hero Jim gives me goosebumps. :) Don't go on another hiatus, I'll start checking this site more often. :)  



Author's Response: ah i'm so so happy you saw the story! if it makes you happier, i have a new story that isn't posted yet but is completley written and finished. i think you might enjoy it! it's more sappy but still :)

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 12:30 pm Title: "Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow, That I Shall Say Good-Night Till it be Morrow."

Love your version 100 times more! I always look on the updated page for you! Please please write more...and SOON!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! That's so nice of you to say! I'm happy you like my works and are looking for updates! It really means a lot and it inspired me to keep writing!

Reviewer: ireallylovetheoffice Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 02:24 pm Title: "Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow, That I Shall Say Good-Night Till it be Morrow."

o m g i love it!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 12:25 pm Title: "Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow, That I Shall Say Good-Night Till it be Morrow."

Jim is so strong, but at the same time sweet and romantic. He was actually going to propose!! You've got to love a guy like that. I hope he is able to calm Rick down before he brings too much attention to them. Can't wait for more suspence. :)    

I hope everything is ok after the storm you got. It must have sucked being without power for a couple days. It's storming pretty bad here suddenly. I hope we don't lose power too. That would be pretty ironic. :) 



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm so happy you like how I threw that in! I, myself, was especially excited about the whole Shakespeare bit because I'm personally a sucker for his stories. I once had to play Bottom from Midsummer Night's Dream and not to brag, but I think I nailed the part ; ) hahaha

And it isn't as bad as the immense ice storm we had in December. People were without power for 2 weeks! I was fortunate enough to have it back after 9 days but it was so horrible! And not to mention freezing! I hope the storms pass by without harm for you!

Just to let you know, my email is mattieee021@aim.com and my AIM screen name is mattieee021 just in case you ever wanted to chat more about Jam stuff. Because in your reviews I can obviously ramble on and on about what you say! But I'll try and shut up now.

Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 11:54 am Title: "Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow, That I Shall Say Good-Night Till it be Morrow."

This probably has to be my favorite chapter. Not just because I'm a reall big sucker for fluff but the fact that there is real emotion behind it. Jim has a reason to keep going and we got to really see it. - Notice how I'm ignoring the fact that I want to kill you because of Jon. - I think I'm looking forward to the next chapter more than ever.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You're so supportive and it really means a lot! And I had to add that bit in about Jim going on mostly because of Pam because if I were in that situation alone, I don't know how I could have any optimism left. I'm so happy you like this story! I hope you'll add more to yours soon because I will jump on reading it!

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2008 08:23 pm Title: "She Was Beginning to Lose Hope."

I love vacations, but being away put me so behind on all my fanfiction. Lol!

Jim will be so heartbroken over Jon running away like that. Even Pam seems to be losing hope that they will make it. They will need each other to get threw this. I don't trust this crazy guy with Jim and Pam. He is going to give them a lot of trouble.



Author's Response:

I live in Oklahoma and we had another one of our massive spring storms which left me without power from Sunday until this afternoon and it took me a while to catch up so I understand how that is. And for me, it was only 2 days!

I'm really enjoying writing this story. It's fun to mix in suspense along with heroic Jim, a worried Pam, and a comforting boyfriend. I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2008 03:40 pm Title: "She Was Beginning to Lose Hope."

Ok so now i remember this in the movie. The Hot son takes off from Tom's character.

This is starting to get really exciting... well more than it already is. All I know (or think I know) is that there is that creepy guy in the house and a fight between that character and the Tom character and I think someone dies. Am I right or am I just thinking that's what happens?

Oh well I guess I will just have to read to find out. 



Author's Response: I agree that the son is VERY good looking! Haha!  And I'm happy this is exciting for you but I'll make you read the rest of the story to see if your synopsis is correct. Ha ha ha (:<

Reviewer: ireallylovetheoffice Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2008 06:41 am Title: "She Was Beginning to Lose Hope."

This story rocks!! Awesome job! 5/5 stars and 2 thumbs and 2 big toes up!! :D

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so so much! That's awesome of you to say! I'm so happy you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 10:32 am Title: "Take My Hand and Hold On."

Ok this chapter totally had me. I mean i was in with the action. I can't wait for more and since I don't remember how the movie or the book ends i am going to be really excited for it.

Can't wait until more action. 



Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that! I still find your reviews to be the best and I love receving each one of them! Thank you so much for all of your support! I'm so glad you're excited for the rest of this story as I am excited to write more.

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 06:42 pm Title: "Take My Hand and Hold On."

YAY!! I actually went back and re-read this the other day. I'm glad to see you are going to be continuing with it. At the beginning of this chapter I felt so bad for Jim. He is tring so hard to keep Pam and Jon safe. What a sweetheart! (I want one!!) Please update soon!! :)

Author's Response: And yet, another awesome review from you! I can't thank you enough for them all! You're the best, seriously! I'm so happy you like this story! I love writing it and it is so cool that it is showing!

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 06:14 pm Title: "Take My Hand and Hold On."

I've only been an office fan for a few weeks so this was such a fun find! i hated war of the worlds but this is an awesome read.
wish i could review more so that you could update!
i want to see what happens when they get to scranton!

Author's Response: I hated the movie too, but I figured that since Jam makes everything better, I may as well give it a shot. I'm inspired to write more after your sweet review so stay put because an update is coming your way! (I sound like one of those cheesy commercials that is telling you that your show will be on after the break). Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 05:05 pm Title: "Take My Hand and Hold On."

Gosh, this is such and interesting way to tell a JAM story. And event though I saw both movies (and hated both) your story is really making my heart beat faster! I really want to see how this story plays out (even though I do know) but reading it with Jim and Pam as characters really makes the story new again!

Author's Response: I'm so psyched that you're enjoying this! (Okay, that's like, the 4th time i've said psyched today. What is up with me? LAME!) I didn't enjoy the movies either; maybe it was just Tom Cruise or possibly Dakota Fanning's constant screams in the second one. But the brother was cute, I must say. I'm having a great time writing this and I'm so happy it shows!

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 10:38 pm Title: "They Have Killed Thousands, Maybe Even Millions Already."

This is great. The Office is my obsession and I really liked this movie. It's a strange combination but it works well. I love your version of Jim. He's the same but also very grown-up and his protectiveness of Pam is adorable. Can't wait for an update!! Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I thought it would be very tough to write considering the weird mix-up, but it actually comes easily to me! Surprise, surprise!

I will try so hard to get the next chapter up soon! Hope you continue reading it! (:

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2007 06:33 pm Title: "They Have Killed Thousands, Maybe Even Millions Already."

You're back!  Thanks for the kind words and for posting.  I really like this story and hope the play is going well - ken

Author's Response: thank YOU! ahh the play is going well. we have an IDR [invitational dress rehersal: we perform for an audience, but they don't have to pay full price because maybe not everybody is in full costume, or the lighting isn't yet complete] today, tuesday, and wed. and then opening night is thursday. we perform straight until the 23, so i'm hoping i will still be able to update! i'm going to try. your recent stories have been GREAT!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2007 09:43 am Title: "They Have Killed Thousands, Maybe Even Millions Already."

OMG I was so happy when I saw this chapter up. I have been missing your stories. This is getting more exciting, and since i recently watched the movie again (nothing else on tv) i remember better what is going on.

This was great.
PS> is there going to be anymore to your xmas carol fic? I'm still willing to beta that one.



Author's Response:

i haven't been home for a while, with thanksgiving and the xmas carol play going on, but i'm going to try and finish the next chapter in a few hours, and i will be sending you that chapter to beta. [:

i watched war of the worlds today, i'm finishing up my next chapter. but then i got sick of watching tom cruise, so i turned off the tv and put in Signs. Abigal Breslin is SO CUTE. and i love joaquin pheoinx. hahaa [x

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2007 08:42 am Title: "They Have Killed Thousands, Maybe Even Millions Already."

another excellent chapter! again, i must say that i'm loving heroic jim! i hope they make it back to scranton. it would be cool if you could tie some of the other characters into this. looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: oooo i may do that [: i just re-watched war of the worlds to get more ideas for my stories, and i really wish it was based off of jim and pam and not tom cruise. ew, tom cruise and his scientology. hahaa [x

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2007 03:45 pm Title: "We're Under Attack."

Cool. Good job!

Author's Response: thankss Big Tuna [: you're so sweet

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 03:31 pm Title: "We're Under Attack."

I'm so in love with Jim Halpert: Action Hero right now! I can't say I was a fan of the movie. Tom Cruise gives me the creeps. But I'm all for Jim Halpert saving the world! hehe. Bring on the next installment!!

Author's Response: i'm not tom cruises biggest fan eitherrr. he' sjust... girly? hahaa! thanks for your sweet feedback! it means a LOTT!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 11:36 am Title: "We're Under Attack."

I don't really remember the movie. But i do remember them being in some guy's basement and an alien thing comes down there. Is that going to happen here too?

This was exciting to read. I'm not huge on sci fi either... but if it has to do with Jim and Pam than I am willing to read it. Can't wait for an exciting chapter 3. 



Author's Response:

yeahh i'm going to have that in there. that was a big part in the movie, and for most people the most suspenseful part.

i read bascially anything with Jim and Pam. i hate it when i find a story that i really like and it's not finished, but it hasn't been updated in a few months.

i have one more chapter already written for this story, and i'm about a fourth of the way into the one after that. i can't wait to post thosee because they were so fun to writee

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 11:31 am Title: "Lightning Never Strikes in the Same Place Twice."

I already like this story more than the movie. (I really thought it kinda sucked... or maybe it was just because I have a dislike of the current Tom Cruise. I liked him up until Vanilla Sky)

I think that had the movie been done focusing on Jim and Pam it would have been one of my fave movies.

Keep bringing us more chapters... I can't wait to read them. 



Author's Response:

i also couldn't stand dakota fannings constant screeching. it gave me a headache (: but i must admit, her brother WAS cute. i really wanted to see The Invisible because he was in it. I also don't like Tom Cruise that much. Most horror movies give you a time to breath and relax, but not this one. So that's another reason why i didn't enjoy it so much

but i'm really glad you are enjoying the story. i am having a great time writing it!

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2007 03:43 pm Title: "Lightning Never Strikes in the Same Place Twice."

Ooh, cool idea. Eagerly awaiting an update.

Author's Response: Thankss Big Tuna! hahaa, i'm glad to hear from you again! I hope you're completley well from Mono and all is well in your life! (:

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2007 03:09 pm Title: "Lightning Never Strikes in the Same Place Twice."

This was a great idea! I really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: thank you! i'm a little uneasy with how people will take this, and i'm glad to know that my first reviewer enjoyed it!

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