Date: February 04, 2008 08:49 pm Title: Sleeping In
'Don't bother.' He thought to himself. Hahaha, loved it. =)
Author's Response: Hee hee, thankyou :)
Date: November 04, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Sleeping In
Aww, that was so cute.
Pam "missing" Jim when he's not in her presence actually makes sense. I always wondered why she put her head on the steering wheel while waiting for Jim to enter the car in "Fun Run".
Author's Response: Haahaa, that was TOTALLY unintentional :P, But now that you mention it, it is a huge possibility! Good call; Teamwork! WHOO! ::high-five::rnrnThank you very much for the review :)
Date: November 03, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Sleeping In
That was a sweet story. Good first story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
7 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Sleeping In
How cute of Pam to get teary over missing him when they were just going to be apart for a few minutes. Sweet story!
Author's Response: I'm glad that little bit came off like that- I was really worried it would seem melodramatic, I'm glad it didn't :) rnThanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'm glad that little bit came off like that- I was really worried it would seem melodramatic, I'm glad it didn't :) rnThanks for the review!
Date: November 03, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Sleeping In
awwwwwww....too cute! Very realistic writing. I don't see Jim and Pam as very glamorus and thats how I relate to them. You captured their relationship perfectly! Great story!!! Thanks for writing!!!
Author's Response: Wow, really? Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Sleeping In
Aw, that was so adorable!
The ending made me giggle. Great job!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Sleeping In
Very cute. I'd love to see you write something longer.
Author's Response: Yeah, I got that a lot on fanfic.net... this is actually the shortest one I have written currently. I have this fear that if I start a long story, I'll never finish it =PrnThank you very much for the review!
Date: November 03, 2007 04:56 pm Title: Sleeping In
I love it. I hope you keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will :)
7 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Sleeping In
this was super cute!!! I really liked it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really like you! Hee hee
Date: November 03, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Sleeping In
You can love Pam's Yaris. The fact that I am considering buying cars just by the fact that Pam or Jim drives them shows how much I care
Minor, but I think: “He gotta go to work.” He was meant to be we?
Sweet story. And Jim, if you weren't taken... and fictional, I would so totally be all about dating you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! And yes. It was meant to be "We"... I'll go fix itrnThanks again! You totally made my night :)