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Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god! This story literally made my breath catch at the end. That was brilliant!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would like to see her answer, please.

Author's Response: Well, maybe I should write a corresponding part then? :)

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was just absolutely beautiful. I love Jim to be a little jealous. Plus the way you did the proposal like that was the kind of romantic stuff i love.

Author's Response: SlightlyJealous!Jim is hot and believable, I think. He's gone through so much to get Pam and he knows what it's like to want her. He can probably spot that from very far away. I'm glad you found it romantic, I always thought that Jim's proposal would be more spontaneous. I don't think he's a very good planner ;)

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god, I'm tearing up! That was so wonderful. That ending was perfect.

Author's Response: Not my intention to make you cry, ha ha! But I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

That. Was. Perfect.  Sigh.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, EH. :D

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was nifty.  Really well done.  I must admit I didn't see it coming...way to step up to the plate there, Jim.   

Author's Response: Glad I surprised you a bit at the end, there! I have a feeling Jim won't be sorry about that leap of faith. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was lovely - and the last line brought tears to my eyes. So very, very sweet.



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!

Reviewer: waltisafox Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

this was so cute...perfect amount of fluff to make my weekend end with a smile. :)

Author's Response: Fluff on a Sunday night is good, no? :)

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was cute! I'm not usually a fan of simple oneshots, but this was lovely, and the last line gave me goosebumps. Well done! --CH

Author's Response: I'm glad you gave it a chance! Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw.  I loved this.  I got a huge smile on my face when they started reading their lists! 

Nicely done! 



Author's Response: I'm happy that I made you smile! Thanks so much.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh--great ending!  Wonderful : )  I love this.  I can picture it happening.  Can't wait to read it again.

Author's Response: Thank you! I always pictured Jim's proposal to be more spontaneous and romantic than extravagant. 

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