1 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2020 07:43 am Title: Four Times She Took A Leap
The transition between the end of chapter one and the beginning of chapter two is life-giving.
Date: November 07, 2007 11:02 pm Title: Four Times She Took A Leap
Well. I may be somewhat in love with you for this. Hope that's okay. It's completely innocent, I promise. Well, mostly.
Author's Response: wow - it's so, so okay! i am somewhat in love with you too - but you only have 4 stores up at MTT. what's the deal with that? i require many, many more :)
Date: November 07, 2007 10:56 pm Title: Four Times He Took A Leap
That last one killed me. Then again, the others killed me, too, but in a good way. :)
Author's Response: well, i was going for death, so good :) seriously, it was supposed to be painful, and the next section was meant to be redemption for all. glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Four Times She Took A Leap
Oh, these are great, too! My favorites are two and four!
Author's Response: wonderful - i'm glad you liked it. thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Four Times He Took A Leap
Oohh, I love these. Three was my favorite. Four killed me!
Author's Response: yay! i totally meant to kill you :) thanks for the feedback.
Date: November 06, 2007 11:46 am Title: Four Times He Took A Leap
*claps hands* Yay! I loved these... even the sad ones. I'm actually preparing to post something strikingly similar to this, with the "what if" theme. Great minds, eh? Great job!
Author's Response: ooh, i can't wait to read it! i'm glad you loved it, thank you...
Date: November 06, 2007 11:32 am Title: Four Times She Took A Leap
I really like how you've re-imagined these moments...so delicate, yet heartfelt. Like perfectly in-character riffs on what actually happened (actually? How meta is that, lol?) I'd be hardpressed to pick a favorite, but I must be in a Motown mood, because I especially loved the simplicity of the Temptations one and the Gladys Knight one was just so full - her rush of adrenaline as she drives (almost into the unknown) and how he finally lets it all out, before tentatively letting her in. Just beautifully and cleanly written. You're very good at this.
(...the sky had been on pause - fantastic phrasing, btw ;-)
Author's Response: first of all - it's entirely possible that your review is better than my whole fic :) i'm glad you liked this - it was fun to write.
Date: November 06, 2007 11:26 am Title: Four Times She Took A Leap
I'm glad that the first of this four fixed everything that was sad about the fourth one about Jim. does that make any sense? well anyway, i like these ideas, interesting little twists to wonder, "what if?"
Author's Response: that makes total sense! i came up with this framework and kept tinkering, not really finding anything that worked for me. and then i wrote that two-parter and it just worked for me. glad you liked it. thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 10:41 am Title: Four Times He Took A Leap
i love one two and three...and four depresses me to no end.
Author's Response: well i hate to leave you depressed - i hope you headed to the first chapter of pam's section! it was way happy :)