10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2008 06:44 am Title: Five: Patrick
Great story. The fluff at the end makes up for the heart-breaking first two chapters! Patrick and Chrissy, huh? I'd love to read THAT fic! Oh, wait! I already have and it rocked too! :)
Date: November 12, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Five: Patrick
Hmm, Michelle. I wonder where you got that name from :P.
Silly Michael. That kid is going to have an identity crisis with Michael around!
This story makes me happy.
Author's Response: Hee, believe it or not, I just chose it because it's the feminine version of Michael, I figured he'd champion to have some version of his name. And if it happens to be my own name, so much the better. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: November 12, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Four: Elizabeth
Froggy is such a cute nickname. OMG, it just oozes sweetness. I love their little family.
And I never heard of that nursey rhyme.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Em. I love their little family, too! And it's an old, archaic nursery rhyme, but I've always liked it.
Date: November 12, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Three: Owen, Evan and Audrey
Three Halpert Babies. I have this strange fascination with triplets. But I have a feeling that this chapter may convince me triplets are not a smart idea.
Nope. Triplets are cute and adorable. The office folks (aka Dwight and Michael) are not so much.
Author's Response:
Ha, triplets are awesome, as far as my experiences go. I've sat for several sets of twins that are nutso, so maybe triplets are different. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 12, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
EMILY! The name is EMILY! I don't care that that isn't my real name, I still love it!
Yeah, so I admit, I am now reading the original story along with this one. So Phoebe makes more sense now.
Poor Jim.
Eek. Yea, Jim. I understand you love Pam, but that isn't so great.
But he loves Emily. And so I will imagine I am Emily.
Author's Response: Hehehe, thanks! I know you're not really Emily, but I did think you'd get a kick out of it. It seems like a fun, spunky name. And I know I was mean to him this chapter.
Date: November 12, 2007 02:59 pm Title: One: Jack
Instead of writing myself I decided to read. Yay!
Its been a while since I read 5 ways Pam tells Jim she's pregnant, but will deal with it :P
I love Mom Pam and its just heart breaking that its Roy's kid!
Ooh. Sara is a good name. Cause I also answer to that name (don't even try to figure out what is with me and names)
Author's Response: Ha, thanks, Miss Jess! I'm glad you're reading, but you need to do some writing, too!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
All the chapters of this story are amaaazinng [/kelly] I read it back to back with each of the chapters from Five Ways Pam Tells Jim She's Pregnant. And while never can get enough Jim/Pam fluff and I am all about the idea of Jim/Pam fitting perfectly together for ever and ever; I truly loved this line the most :
….He settles back into the couch cushions, thinking that he's got everything he ever wanted. Almost….
It just twists at your heart! You are dawesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I tried to make some of it non-fluffy, I'm glad it worked, heh. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Date: November 07, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Five: Patrick
That's so cute McG! I love that we got to see Daddy!Michael. I wonder what being a dad will do to Michael. I really hope we get to see that someday. Anyway, this whole thing was excellent. Nice job! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin!! I hope we see Daddy Michael, too, perhaps because I'm so attracted to men holding babies.
Date: November 07, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Five: Patrick
Oh, you did not - Patrick and Chrissy, i.e. Dwight and Angela's kid?! I just fell a bit more in love with this story.
I love this, I really do. It's sweet and normal and - the last two chapters are probably my favourites. Love it. Love it. I can't even be descriptive about it! - you've killed my vocabulary!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I love that you used the word 'normal' -that's something I was going for. I'm sorry for killing your vocab :-)rnrnI first wrote about Patrick and Chrissy in "Nothing's Fair in Fifth Grade?" and they've just stuck in my mind, so I had to use them in this story. It's my own personal canon, which is kinda fun.
Date: November 07, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Five: Patrick
*squees* Oh Michael. Sometimes I want to shoot him in the face and then others he makes my heart burst. This falls under that last catagory. Thank you so much for this series! It really made my day.
Author's Response: Hee, that's exactly how I feel about him, too. I think the fact that he's completely innocent is what has kept him from being strangled by just about anyone. I'm glad you enjoyed this!
Date: November 07, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Five: Patrick
So Patrick's girlfriend is Dwight and Angela's baby!?
Aww.
Author's Response: Ha, yes, in my weird little personal canon, she totally is. I first wrote about them in 'Nothing's Fair in Fifth Grade?" and couldn't resist slipping in a mention. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 01:27 pm Title: One: Jack
All five of these are so real and in character. A lovely read!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I can't wait to get over and finish Observer Effect...
Date: November 07, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Four: Elizabeth
Yay! This made me a very happy camper.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad! I like to give a little more fluff with each chapter. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 11:29 am Title: Four: Elizabeth
This was so sweet! I love babyfic, which makes me sad that there's only one chapter left! Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks soi much! I'm glad you like it, I hope you liek the last chapter as well. Babyfic is way fun!
Date: November 07, 2007 08:26 am Title: Four: Elizabeth
I had really loved your original story, and this sequel lives up to it. It's great, even if the first chapter broke Jim's heart. I'm not always a big fan of babyfic, but this is not about the babies being cutesy, it's all about the parents trying to live through it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, MA! I'm really enjoying writing it, and I'm glad it's a little different than you might expect. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 07:39 am Title: Four: Elizabeth
Aw! That's so adorable! And I love that you get to name each new Jam baby. How fun is that? Also, I'm still reading the old story along with the new, and it was so much fun to go from an angsty chapter to them enjoying life with Elizabeth. Great job on this whole story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having SO much fun naming the babies, you have no idea. Although, as strange as it seems, they're kind of naming themselves, if you know what I'm talking about. I figured they'd get over the shock of having a late-in-life baby and really enjoy her. Cheers for the review!
Date: November 07, 2007 07:35 am Title: Four: Elizabeth
This is really cute! i love how you get to see all of their family change here. and i love how older Jim and Pam still have the hots for each other, and now instead of freaking out about a baby she's kind of asking if another one would be ok. it's precious!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I do think they would have the hots for each other forever, I know I plan to find JK sexy til I die. I saw a pic of his father, and he'll probably be a very handsome silver fox!
Date: November 06, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
This breaks my heart because i want Jim to just be happy... and sad Emily makes me sad too. it's good to know that he just can't be happy without Pam though. I like how you've written this one though. it's good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks, rulesofjinx! I like writing Sad Jim, it's fun in a masochistic way, but it's much better now that they're actually together on the show.
Date: November 06, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Three: Owen, Evan and Audrey
Aw!!! That's sooo cute! I love the triplets. And I love seeing how everyone else in the office is doing that far in the future. All in all this was fabbity-fab-fab!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! I wish I would've delved into what the other Office mates were doing, but it didn't fit the length of the story. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: November 06, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Three: Owen, Evan and Audrey
Obviously chapter3 was my favorite--i like the idea of them having 3 at a time and Michael's comment and the bet they had on it was so true to form...are there going to be more chapters with Jambabies? I hope so!
Author's Response: Oh, there are more Jambabies to follow! Thanks for reading/reviewing, I'm glad you like it!
Date: November 06, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Three: Owen, Evan and Audrey
Aww, I liked this one! Great job!
Author's Response: Why thank you! It'll be finished tomorrow- thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviews are like crack, and I am an addict. Thanks again, JennInTheCity!
5 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Three: Owen, Evan and Audrey
"...a gift from Pam and Jim in their DNA." What a line, and what a sweet, sweet story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part, I really liked imagining it! I'm glad you like the rest of the story, too, thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: November 06, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
Okay. I knew I would love this, and I'm so right! I can totally see little Ben. I decided to switch back and forth between this and Five Ways Pam Tells Jim She's Pregnant, and I think it worked really well. Especially when I gasped when Emily mentioned naming their baby Phoebe. I really feel awful for Jim though. He's counting the days? Poor guy. Good thing this isn't canon or anything. I'd be really upset then.
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! I'm glad this isn't canon, too, it's fun to write but is vair, vair sad for the Jammer in me. I'm glad you found a good way to read them together! Thanks for the review!
Date: November 06, 2007 02:34 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
Aww, that first one almost made me cry. You promised fluff soon, right? ;p
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad I didn't completely make you cry! I think it would be torture for poor Jim to watch Pam and Roy be parents. Thanks for reading and reviewing!