Reviews For Someday I'll Be Invincible
Reviewer: StarShine Signed 
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Date: November 06, 2007 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. I never considered the possibility of Pam's parents being split up, but wow. This history you've created. Wow. No words but wow.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I've always thought there was that possibility, and this is the expression of that.
Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: November 06, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is an interesting view on Pam's past! I like that she might have some unknown motivations for what she does on the show. Nice job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's what I was going for.
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
"She doesn’t understand how she could let a piece of herself simply walk out the door, because they may have had problems but all the moments where she felt whole had to add up into an answer that spelled stay." This was a beautiful line - great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oof. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks!