9 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 06:08 am Title: Chapter 7
“There’s a dozen there, just for you. They’re all different, unique in their own way, but ultimately beautiful, just like you.”
Wow. *sigh* I love this line. And this whole chapter is my handsdown fave scene from the movie. Well besides the adoration bit. But wow. And who doesn't want Jim to keep his hair messy like that?I know I do.
I'm super interested to see how you're going to end it and whatnot. If you uh ever feel inspired and want help, I'd more than happy to beta for ya ;) If you want it.
Can't wait for more! I'm so happy you reposted this :D
Date: November 07, 2007 06:02 am Title: Chapter 6
because I am a professor, I’m not supposed to sound ‘manly’, just always professional
Ha! Michael. and I hope our hero doesn't have a timely demise in this story.... :)
Date: November 07, 2007 05:59 am Title: Chapter 5
oh I totally think Roy should've been the silly construction worker who crushed trhough Jim's (sorry james') wall. Haha.
And that last line? Whew. Great :)
Date: November 07, 2007 05:56 am Title: Chapter 4
“I am a genius.” Michael slowly pushed his office door closed and smiled to himself
Aha! there's the michael scott we all know and love. *shakes head*
Date: November 07, 2007 05:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I do love cookies. And Jim/Pam. So this is an allaround winning chapter :)
Date: November 07, 2007 05:48 am Title: Chapter 2
ahah I love that Michael is the professor. Oh boy, that's a scary thought.
And Jan as the author! So great! I can totally see that. I totally love the line they have about the little innocous act will result in his imminent death. Such a great line and I love how you've written it into your story :D
Lovely.
Date: November 06, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello?” he spoke quietly but clearly to the brush.
ha ha. I can just picture this (well thanks to the movie too) but Jim talking to the brush.
I love that Pam works at an art supply store because well it's obviously what she loves (besdies Jim) and naughtay beesley with the tattoo! heh
When she turned her back to James he saw a small tattoo peeking out from the hem of her shirt on the small of her back and he found himself imagining his hand covering it. The feel of her soft delicate skin under his body made his cheeks flush. He imagined her smile bright and early in the morning with a delicate kiss to his lips after saying hello.
*le sigh* SO great. Even thought it's from the movie...... still makes my heart skip a beat.
Yay for reposts:D
Date: November 06, 2007 09:00 pm Title: Introduction
ooh such an exciting start to a great fic!! I'm pumped to reread the rest! Thanks so much for reposting! Be prepared for reviews ;)
Love it so far :D
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm always prepared for reviews! Ok not always, but I look forward to them. ;)