9 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2009 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I didn't think that they'd end up together! But they did, and it was great. Also, even though it was spur of the moment, it didn't seem too cheesy... well, a little cheesy, but Pam likes cheesy! Great job with that aspect, and great story!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was so sweet. Bravo to Jim for being so brave to go with Pam to tell Roy. This line was great - "Jim flexed his biceps and tried to look fierce. It wasn’t a big success. Pam shook her head. Oh, they were in so much troublei".
9 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2006 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay, I like this one! And this is a fabulous sentence:
She wrapped her arms around Jim’s neck and kissed him, the way she had never let herself dream of doing, and he kissed her back, the way he had always dreamed of doing.
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2006 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey! I remember this one! You totally called that Jim would confess at Casino Night!
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2006 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wonderul. I wish it did happen that way.
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2006 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this. Now on to read more.