9 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 06:58 am Title: Breakable
Oh, that was so good. I could cry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 06:07 am Title: Breakable
So much love for this story. I love how Jim is protective of her even when he's angry. The way he buckles her in and then later helps her get out of the car.
I was sad when he wanted to go home but so happy that he came back.
This is a great story...more, soon, please :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
I love how the song just depicts the image of someone buckling someone into a car. I mean, its romantic in a way, huh? I love it...all thanks is due to Ingrid's songs....they inspire me to write.
Date: November 13, 2007 09:21 pm Title: Keep Breathing
I rarely review stories. I know, I receive without giving, but I had to commenton yours by simply saying: please keep writing!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks. I feel very honored. I will try my best to stay on top of my writing and creating. I really hope to do more since the strike is going on. It stinks that we have to go without...so, I think the more people write...the more the void will be filled...well, for a little while atleast. Thanks for reading.
Date: November 13, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Breakable
Absolutely beautiful. Makes my heart swell. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Breakable
This was beautiful. I don't know what else to say- just beautiful dialogue, descriptions, song, everything!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
Date: November 13, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Breakable
This chapter was just mesmerizing. I loved it. I love dark, brooding Jim.
Author's Response:
Thanks Ab! Can I call you Abby?? Hehehe. I love DarkJim as well. There something about that side of him that makes me wanna burst into flames. Gah....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: November 13, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Breakable
love it love it love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: November 13, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Keep Breathing
oh and you're going to do "The Way I Am", right?! please....
Author's Response: Hahaha. Possibly. I could try to muster up something for that song. I think LoveFool has already done "The Way That I Am" in fic-form. So, you might do check out some of her newest fics. I know she's been inspired by Ingrids music this week too! So, somewhere between the two of us, you'll see a "The Way that I am" ficlet. :) THanks for reading!
Date: November 13, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Breakable
As with your last chap, this is absolutely beautiful. I love this song too, probably even more than Keep Breathing. This is just so vividly expressed, and the attention to little details on your descriptions makes them really complete. Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Don-kah(that's German if you didnt know). You're reviews are always so nice....you're great! I pride myself in the fact that I can imagine whats going on and actually put it into to words (well, sometimes)....so, thanks for pointing that out. I appreciate it all. And, yes, I'll be doing more on this shortly. I love all of Ingrid's stuff...
8 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Breakable
Another beautiful chapter. I felt badly that Pam was so excited for her family to meet Jim, and then her brother spoiled everything by his smart ass comment that ended up hurting both of them.
"So, she grabbed her jacket and keys and pulled open her front door to reveal him standing there, heart on his sleeve as the snow glistened on the ground."
Awesome line. I'm glad that when Pam went to leave to go to him, he was at her door.
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. And, as for you pointing out your favorite line, that makes me all sorts of excited and happy. Thanks!
Date: November 13, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Breakable
How about you get paid in....... reviews??? Orr....
http://www.ecu.edu/cs-admin/financial_serv/images/Money_Coins.jpg
Will you accept virtual money? Or SB? I'm on it.
Sorry i wasn't able to get this back to you last night but you know sickness is no fun at all my friend. I might have another chatper for you though...... :) So be tuned. I have to work till 8 so no homework + being bored = v. fic productive WBJ :)
Oh back to fic: LOVELY JOB. I like to imagine this was me and not Pam in thsi story and it makes it ten times more happy ;) except the whole fight thang. Jim's speech? breathless.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! For the money....and the review. You're awesome...you know that. Thanks a bunch for spending so long on helping me develop this fic. It's because of you that Jim and Pam went to meet her parents...and the reason everybody loved this chapter....thanks!
Date: November 13, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Keep Breathing
short review because i am also trying to eat dinner and lunch right now. all before class. woot for multitasking!
And I may have to download that song.... um, like now.
ya know, i already like storms, but i think i would enjoy them a thousand times more if i was lying next to jim. i love the imagry!
now i get to read chapter 2 :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the help on this! I appreciate it! You're great!
8 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 06:58 am Title: Keep Breathing
I liked this a lot. It had a dreamy, middle-of-the-night feel. "It’s just a little rain, he’d say. She’d believe him too. Even if the weather man was reporting tornadoes or flooding. She’d believe every word he said, as long as he was wrapping his arms around her." Lovely and very comforting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had the same feeling when I wrote it....that it was very dreamy and had that sleepy time feel to it, you know? So, thanks. I think there will be another chapter to this story too, so keep an eye for it!
Date: November 11, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Keep Breathing
Can't go wrong with Ingrid Michaelson...looks like great minds think alike -- I just posted something that was inspired by one of her songs. This was just beautiful...I love the idea of Pam being just a little bit afraid of thunder and lightening and lying next to Jim... really lovely.
Author's Response: Yes, I've seen you posted a fic inspired by Ingrid as well. Great minds, is right. And, thank you for the lovely compliments. We have great taste don't we? hehehe.
Date: November 11, 2007 09:07 pm Title: Keep Breathing
This is brilliant. I was a little unsure considering you said it was fluff and I don't generally associate this particular song (wonderful though it is) with fluff ... probably Grey's Anatomy's fault. However once I started reading everything fitted into place. There is some really beautiful imagery throughout and the song actually fits perfectly. Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response: Why thank you!!!! I hope it reads well...at first, I thought about the dark side of the song, but as soon as I thought of JAM, this sweet image came out. So, thanks for giving it a shot. Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Keep Breathing
Oh, beautiful!! I haven't heard the Ingrid Michaelson song, but this actually reminds me of that song Electrical Storm by U2. Although that's about a relationship falling apart...so not really.
Maybe I'm just thinking of that line 'the night it is aching/two lovers lie with no sheets on their bed'. So sonically I had the gorgeous xylophone chimes and the pulsing swell of the storm from that song going through my head while I was reading.
Not really sure if that made sense. Anyway, the point is I loved it :) Very sweet.
Author's Response: Oh, I don't think I've ever heard that song...but it sounds like it would fit perfectly for this fic, huh? Thank you very much for reading and taking the time out to review. I appreciate it all!
Date: November 11, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Keep Breathing
I am such a sucker for this kind of fic. It was beautifully written all the way through, and I especcially loved the end with her wanting the thunder to come back so he will pull her closer. Gorgeous job!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I appreciate the review and comments!
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Keep Breathing
Beautiful title and lovely story. Very nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly. I appreciate the kind words and for you reading this! Thanks a million!
Date: November 11, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Keep Breathing
Wow, BeckySue, hate to break it to you, but you're awesome. :) I know I've already been super super extremely fangirly on you tonight but oh my god.
All I have to say is I love being Superbeta for you!!!! :D B/c you're SuperWriter!! You're the Butch Cassidy to my Mozart ;) haha Lovely job!!!
Author's Response: First to read, first to beta, first to review....its only natural. You go girl. I couldnt do this without you.