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Reviewer: a little teapot Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2023 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm not really sure why, but I really liked this. It was interesting to see these two interacting and have someone taking care of Jim even for a little while back then.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2006 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I should have guessed it was Angela when I read about the bun, but I blame girl7 for making me wish it were Pam.

Author's Response: Ha! Darn that girl7! Just kidding, love her :)  Thanks, Luna!

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2006 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1

hee, jim and angela, now they would make an interesting pair!


Author's Response: Yeah - Gavrilo-Princip has a good Jim-Angela fic at ff.net called Beside You in Time. Check it out...

Reviewer: Shroom Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, I really liked this!  It's nice to see little realistic scenes between unusual pairings.  And your characterizations were excellent, as per usual.  Jim's awkwardness and Angela being no-nonsense but not too cold. 

I really loved the line about Jim trying to spit without... spitting.  That's so perfect, and so true!  Being around Angela would totally make you hyper-aware of how uncouth you are.

Nice job! 



Author's Response: Cool, thanks, Shroom! ;)  Yeah, I'd just have to accept that I'd never meet her standards - ha!

Reviewer: Boof Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Different. I like it.  I totally didn't see it coming--should have with the bun, which I noticed on second reading.  (had to see if I missed something)  But I was thinking, how does Pam know how to fix a cut.  I think I just had in my mind the other basketball bathroom story and so I read what I wanted to read, which I'm thinking was your intention.  Anyway, well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Boof :)  I just thought that after Angela ripped into Dwight for snagging the first aid kit, she'd be unlikely to yield it to Pam, and didn't think anyone had written an Angela-tends-to-Jim's-busted-lip fic.

(Wow, someone should take the commas and dashes away from me.)  Thanks, again!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think the webisode where she apologized to Kevin for being mean made me appreciate this 10 times more. I love Nice Angela. Different, but still true to her character. This was really sweet. I can so picture Jim smiling after this little encounter.

Author's Response: Hey, that's great about the webisode! Thanks for your feedback, proposals! :)

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooohhhh...sneaky. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, samsmom :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooo... nice!  You've captured the sexy efficiency of Angela very well.

She makes him feel like a giraffe picking itself up off the ground.

Hee. 



Author's Response: Heh, thanks, Beth! ;)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh!  Brilliant - simply brilliant (as usual).  And your description of her hair and the "tyranny of her bun" -- so perfect.  I think you could write a story about Jim microwaving a potato, and it would somehow be brilliant.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks, girl7!

Reviewer: Jodithgrace Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cute. I guess injuries bring out the nice in Angela.

Author's Response: Thanks, Jodithgrace :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1

What a great twist!  I so didn't see that coming, I just figured Jim didn't know what a "bun" was and never thought it would be anyone but Pam.  Well done!

Author's Response: Hee, thanks, kaystar! :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1

I did think it was Angela because I figured she would never relinquish her First Aid kit willingly! LOL  I love stories where two characters get to share a little moment.  So much fun to read. 



Author's Response: Thanks, Morning Angel ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Totally had me on this one. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1

OOO! You little sneak!! You had me fooled until the thing about her having her in a bun. Great job!

Author's Response: I actually didn't plan it as a surprise, but that's kinda fun :) Thanks, xoxoxo!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 05:43 am Title: Chapter 1

loved this! particularly loved the last line--angela seems like a softie once you get to know her and i love than jim figures that out. really sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you, yippee :)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 05:22 am Title: Chapter 1

AH! Loved this. Even though I thought I knew who it would be it kind of caught me by surprise. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane! :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

What a nice, tiny moment. Angela's like a perfect porclean doll next to giant Jim, isn't she? Smooth but not cuddly.

Author's Response: Softer than he thought. Thanks, nqllisi :)

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