Date: November 28, 2007 09:13 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
wow. I'm in... awe. This was amazingly descriptive, and I felt like I was Jim Halpert. wow. I love it so much. there aren't words. woah. intense. that's the best I can come up with.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! It's fun writing Jim =)
8 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2007 08:26 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
"Her eyes, which pierced a straight course into his heart and unwrapped it for all to see, left him feeling bare and unprotected."
What a beautiful line. I really enjoyed your version of CN - you did a great job showing Jim's heartbreak.
Congrats on your first Office fic! Hope we see more from you in the near future!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's always hard to write something that has been done so many times before. Good to know there's still room to do my own spin =). rnrnThere will be more to this story and hopefully more Office fics in the future. I've written fic for other fandoms but the Office fandom makes me nervous b/c there SO many good writers here...=)
Date: November 28, 2007 06:22 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
Guh. Love the song, love how you evoked the feeling of time standing still. Nice job.
Author's Response: =D, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2007 04:11 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
great song, and great story! well done!
Author's Response: Thanks =D!
7 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2007 03:55 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks =D!
Date: November 28, 2007 03:50 pm Title: hello, i've waited here for you
Okay, this is really great! I really like your writing style.
Also, 'Everlong' is my absolute favorite song of all time. You have good taste in music :P
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Yeah, Everlong will forever be on my must-play list. It's an amazing song =).