Date: February 09, 2024 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet.
Date: November 30, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute I love the ending.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!! It's nice to have the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww. Jim loves his girls. And we love Jim. The second part would have been super sweet and fluffy all by itself, but adding the sad first part both tempers the sappiness and makes it all the sweeter. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I wasn't sure it would work, but I'm glad it did!!
Date: November 30, 2007 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great contrast between those two situations. Love the ongoing "prank" between Jim and his little girls, and how they're trying to outdo each other telling him about their day. So cute. Lovely little story, Sed!
Author's Response: Awww thanks! I appreciate the feedback!!
Date: November 30, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
aww!!! i love it! fluff makes me happy.
Author's Response: Thanks! Happy to make you happy! :)
Date: November 29, 2007 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh what a cool concept! Very sweet story, I loved the girls' rapid fire dialogue.
Author's Response: Thanks! Rapid fire dialogue...I'm glad you read it that way! That's the way my girls attack my husband when he comes home from work (they do the hiding in the closet thing) and then they rapid fire dialogue at him!
8 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done, sed! The last line really made it for me.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!! I thought the last line was kind of sweet!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww i love this parallel between single and married JAM. you should do a fic from pam's perspective as well :)
Author's Response:
OOh, I hadn't thought about doing one from Pam's perspective. Interesting concept. I just might do that! Thanks for the review!
Date: November 29, 2007 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay sed!
This was beautiful. No more lonely Jim. Also, Jim as a father is magical. It was also so "Jim" to want to change up the way the girls scare him.
Just wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks, Bees! I am glad you liked it! I love to envision Jim as a Daddy! I wish we could see that some day. In fact, I wish we could see any Office some day. :(
Date: November 29, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, that was so sweet, Sedimentary. Did not see that second scenario coming. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just felt so bad for Jim that I had to write him happy too!
Date: November 29, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
SED! that was awesome! so sweet! love the contrast!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was so excited to read your story I forgot to rate it after leaving my review.
Author's Response: That's OK, one more won't hurt! :)
Date: November 29, 2007 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww... one more won't hurt! Nice parallel.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
Date: November 29, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW Sed - that was fantastic. Love how you used 2 very different times in Jim's life. He really comes home! Daddy and his girls...life doesn't get much sweeter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I have always pictured Jim with daughters. I think he'd be a great Dad to girls!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so sweet! gah, jam needs to have kids like now, haha. great story. feel free to fill the hiatus void whenever possible, especially with fluff!
Author's Response: Jim with kids...what a fluffy vision that would be!
Date: November 29, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, Sed! This was amazing. I loved the contrast between the two stories. "..he starts thinking that maybe one more won't hurt..." Brilliant! You did such a great job illustrating utter despair and sheer joy.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I am so glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love how you compare the two scenarios! Very clever. And I love imagining the happy Halpert family. Thanks for that little bit o' happy on this sad Thursday.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope we get to actually see a happy Halpert family some day. Is that too much to ask????