10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2008 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
AWWWWW i LOVED it!!!! so cute, loved them interaction with jim and angela, and jim and pam (duh)
Date: December 25, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really cute. The little insight into Angela's feelings was great. We're used to Angela being cold and hard, it was nice for you to show that she's aware of how she comes off, but is almost too scared to change that perception.
Date: December 25, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol, love the Creed moment...I can totally picture him saying Toyota Tercel,1989
Date: December 23, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw, this was fun and sweet and just what I needed if I couldn't have a real Christmas episode. I love the way you handled Toby, and also the D/A/A triangle. That's just how those two plot lines should play out on screen!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: December 21, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great job with this story. I love how they shook hands with each other, cute. Silly kids. And that signing the love contract gives their relationship "meaning".
I'm sure you'll heal up quickly dear, and will soon be enjoying "chewy" food again. Take it easy now.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) (And I'm really looking forward to eating some pizza... but I am nowhere near there yet, sadly.)
Date: December 21, 2007 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this is exactly what I needed today! Great way to wrap up the story and awesome job overall :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
Date: December 21, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, the HR papers! Nice finish, carbondalien!
Feel better!
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you! :)
Date: December 21, 2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 6
this was a perfect ending (: this whole story was perfect !
Author's Response: Wow, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6
this story is wonderful. all the characters are spot-on. i hope that they have something similar to this on the show regarding toby, and is sadness over pam. and i could totally see michael saying something like "So Jim and Pam are probably going to go home and get naked and touch each other! So what?" that actually made me snort! so funny! well done!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I feel like the Toby/Pam issue would be dealt with in a subtle way, just because of how Toby is.
Date: December 21, 2007 09:04 am Title: Chapter 6
This was really cute! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Nice job with the dialogue, it felt true to the characters. And I really liked how you explored the Jim and Angela dynamic. Good luck with your wisdom teeth. Too bad you can't watch Lifetime movies with Jim and Pam!
Author's Response: I'm happy people think I was true to the characters in this - that's the best compliment. I'm glad you liked it. (And I wouldn't mind watching Lifetime movies with Jim and Pam... and eating actual food!)
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 08:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Very sweet ending! I just wish the show was back to see Dwight and Angela really make up! Hope your wisdom teeth discomfort passes soon!!! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Right now I can't wait to eat some real food. Pudding, Jello, and mashed potatoes are not really that filling.
Date: December 21, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Hey, great job, carbon! You rock. Great ending.
Author's Response: You rock for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: December 20, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good luck with the wisdom teeth. Hurry back to this story as soon as youre well enough to do so! It's getting better and better every chapter!
Author's Response: When I'm over this crazy sleepiness thing, the last chapter will be up. Painkillers and ice packs are gifts from above, let me tell you. But anyway, I'm glad you've been enjoying this, cause it was quite fun to write. :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Nicely done. Poor Toby.
One thing though...don't vending machines run on electricity? (You can totally say they run on battery power, or backup generators or something and I'll believe you!!) :)
Great job, such fun to read. Can't wait for more!
Best of luck with the wisdom teeth!
Author's Response: There are actually battery powered vending machines. I did a little Google searching to see if it would work and my uncle (who used to fill them as a part time job) confirmed that he's seen a few, so I was pretty relieved that everything would work out. Thanks for the review (and wisdom teeth support)! :)
Date: December 20, 2007 11:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Great story I hope this wisdom teeth come out well just got mine out two days ago.
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this little story of mine. And I'm glad someone feels my pain, haha. Not too much fun.
Date: December 20, 2007 10:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Loving the story so far! Eck, good luck with the teeth. I had mine done about a month ago (surgically). It's no fun, but you'll feel like yourself in a few days.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :) The teeth aren't as bad as I thought, but I am so sleepy right now from the meds.
Date: December 20, 2007 09:59 am Title: Chapter 5
aww Poor Toby. At least he kind of got courage to ask Pam! I can see that kind of like subtle, subtext Toby being on the real show (that is... if we had real eps now...) And I love the Angela/jim interaction. So great.
Good luck with wisdom teeth! No fun at all, I hope you're feeling well enough to post the ending!! I'm lovin' this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have the ending up in a little while - it's just that the painkillers are making me crazy sleepy (like right now). :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter! I love Jim and Ang being stuck together - and the possibility that Angela may talk to Jim :) Great job - can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) Thanks for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 09:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Finally had a chance to read this - good stuff! Looking forward to more Angela/Jim interaction.... :D
Author's Response: Angela/Jim interaction is a deliciously awkward thing (which I looooove). Glad you like it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 08:49 am Title: Chapter 4
this story is so cute, i love it. kelly's lip gloss situation was so kelly and i loved it when jim made fun of pam for saying, "being real," that was adorable.
Author's Response: Those were two of my favorite parts to write, so I'm glad you liked them. Thanks for reviewing! :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 05:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Kelly smiled. Finally, Pam spoke her language. "Yeah. I just need a sale. I'm sick of full-price douchebags." Love it. Fun chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: December 18, 2007 04:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Hey, great job. This story is certainly building towards something. I am patiently waiting for the heart to heart between Angela and Jim. Nice work, carbondalien.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. The heart to heart is coming... well, what Angela might consider a heart to heart, anyway.
Date: December 17, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
I literally laughed out loud when I read this :D great job !
Author's Response: Yay for making you laugh! Thank you. :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 3
He was quite sure that Angela thought he was an ungodly heathen, but then again, if his only other options were Dwight and Andy, he'd pick a heathen too.
ha. good point. good point.
Author's Response: I'd pick Jim too, but he'd probably be my first choice. ;)
Date: December 17, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying this story, carbondalien. Is it going to stay this PG rated or are we gonna get some sweet snowed-in smut?
Author's Response: It'll probably stay in the PG range because I'm not very good at smut. I end up giggling like Kevin, which does not facilitate good smut writing. ;) Glad you're enjoying it. :)