Date: October 09, 2006 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love your style, and it's so very Jim! It's extremely well-written!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I especially loved the last line - "True blue always returns for the second wave."
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This piece reads like a poem. Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped it would.
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This piece reads like a poem. Beautiful!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Never thought of blue that way. I have a whole new view of it now. :)
Author's Response:
As long as it doesn't confuse the color spectrum for you, I'm glad :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1
"He waits for her to hear the difference."
Fantastic.
Author's Response:
Somehow, you always manage to comment on the lines I hope people would notice. Thanks so much for that :)
7 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I remember this one! Again, very nice. Nice use of imagery.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope that was too much blue for you ;)
8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1
The wordplay is skillfully done, here, and very evocative. By the end, it threatens to overwhelm the emotional content a little bit, but for your first one ever? This was an amazing start.
Author's Response:
If I recall correctly, this piece wasn't always well-received - I think in part because it's rather confusing. It's quite interesting for me, however, to revisit, because it quite neatly sums up how I felt about Jam in those early moments not long after the finale. I've since sobered up (I think).
Thanks for the review :)