Date: December 22, 2007 06:12 pm Title: On The Road
Oh, Pam, those naughty thoughts will get you into so much (wonderful) trouble!
BTW, this whole concept is so exciting! I'll live if you don't update super quickly, but I am really anticipating what they'll do at each stop along the way.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm still planning what they'll do at each point, and it's exciting to me, too :)
Date: December 22, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chicago
LOL! Awkward masturbation scene. No, no... not yet.
But seriously, this story is sooo good. I love the whole idea of it and you're writing it so well. You've really got their characters down. Ooooh, I'm so excited. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to get an update tonight :)
Date: December 22, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chicago
I say yes...yes..yes..yeesssssssssssssssssss!! I love that they get to be more open with each other, I hope they pick up on these converations about each other! please continue . Amaaaazzzziiing!!! Can't wait for some more awesomeness!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I don't disappoint ;)
Date: December 22, 2007 08:34 am Title: On The Road
that image of them in the hotel room was just... amazing :) great job !
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you!
Date: December 22, 2007 06:55 am Title: Chicago
This story is really cute and I'm looking foward to all the places they'll visit just as much as how their relationship will evolve.
I imagine the two of them lying in bed for awhile, wondering if the other one is awake, and just being excited at the thought of finally being able to explore the possibilities of "more than that" between them. Yay for new beginnings!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sticking to Pam POV for this story, so we won't be seeing any of what Jim is thinking (except what Pam thinks he's thinking), but I can assure you that there is some thinking and wondering in bed in the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chicago
Totally akward masterbation time!
Love this story. You have really good pacing.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you said this, because I always worry about pacing with my writing! I think I'm saving awkward masturbation time for later, but we'll see ;)
Date: December 21, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Chicago
nope it is still to early...
but the story is going great! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: December 21, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Chicago
Mmmm....preferably not.....this story has a nice thing going....don't do that!!
Author's Response:
As the next chapter is written, I've skillfully avoided it.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
Ok, this is FANTASTIC. You've really captured the characters voices, and the premise is great. I'm really looking forward to updates, this story has me completely hooked.
Author's Response: Wee! I'm glad you liked it :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 05:11 pm Title: Chicago
I'm liking this so far. Just one thing - Yellowstone isn't on the way to Seattle from California unless you are doing something really, really wrong. I think you mean Yosemite. Yellowstone is in the northwest corner of Wyoming and I-80 cuts across the bottom of Wyoming. I've driven it across the country too many times - LOL!
Author's Response:
I know, they're going to follow the coast and head home that way (Washington to Idaho to Wyoming). Sorry, maybe I should have specified! But I'm glad you like it :)
Date: December 21, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Chicago
Really enjoying this. Intrigued yet a little nervous about awkward masturbation. I'm hooked, though. I'll just read through my fingers : )
Author's Response: Haha, I think I'm not going to do that part, at least not now. But I think they're both a little frustrated, so I'm sure it's not entirely improbable...
Date: December 21, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Chicago
OK.
1) Absofruitly love this story. Got all giddy when I saw it was updated just now.
2) It is TOTALLY time for that scene. Looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
1) Awesome, I'm giddy you're giddy!
2) I hate to disappoint, but I'm not sure that scene's going to fit in just yet. I'm trying to build up the awkwardness and I'm not sure I'm up to that yet. But I'll think about it. Sexy things are sure to be happening soon.
Date: December 21, 2007 03:09 pm Title: On The Road
Oh this is fun!! More, please!!! --CH
Author's Response: Glad you're having fun! I need something to keep me distracted while I impatiently await All-Inclusive updates.
Date: December 21, 2007 02:58 pm Title: On The Road
LOVE IT!! Keep it coming!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying ;)
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 10:41 am Title: On The Road
this is awesome so far. i love the line "So you humored me. Like I was making you macaroni necklaces." so so funny and right on. you capture their voices very well..cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!
Date: December 21, 2007 10:13 am Title: On The Road
and I shall review and review and review until you are finished this story!! Awesome chapter!! Please continue it's too good not to!
Author's Response: I will try to finish it, just for you :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 08:24 am Title: Taking A Chance
Totally digging this, and excited for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're having fun with it :)
Date: December 21, 2007 08:13 am Title: Taking A Chance
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so excited about this story. Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm excited you're excited!
Date: December 21, 2007 07:17 am Title: Taking A Chance
I'm glad you kept it going!! This isn't the end is it?
Author's Response: Oh no, I've got a lot more planned. Just posted next chapter, in fact :)
Date: December 20, 2007 11:56 am Title: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
Wow, deerinthepark, I'm glad you found this! It's so perfectly Pam.
It's not that she's never considered a relationship with Jim-- she has. Every small, secret moment between them, she's wondered 'what-if'. But it's always been just that; she could always brush it off as too fanciful, impractical; unreachable. She's never really felt good enough for him. Jim got pretty girls like Katy, and could spoil them with his attention and wit. It wasn't that she didn't sense his attraction to her-- she did. But she'd convinced herself it was just the leftovers of a "crush" that would never become anything more than that. Girls like her were lucky to get guys like Roy: dependable, handsome and easy. And they were mostly happy together. It was enough.
This paragraph sums up entirely what I've ever thought of Pam's character and motives in a perfectly succint few sentences.
I loved this, thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! Glad you liked it :)