1 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2019 06:24 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I guess this wrapped up right here, but I'm glad you at least got them to a pretty good place before it had to end. Thanks for what you did, and I wish you had a little more.
Date: May 17, 2011 12:29 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I think the ending of the chapter was great. And I gotta say, I just read all 11 chapters straight through and it makes me nervous everytime Pam starts doubting her relationship with Jim. Luckily, you never let that mood last long and it never ruins the whole trip or anything. She does love jim. And she'd told hom. And they're having a lot of incredible sex; even though they both know they aren't an official couple yet - 'cause Pam deserves a little grief and who am I time.
Can't wait for chapter 12~
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2010 08:51 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
Update :(
Date: September 04, 2009 02:16 pm Title: Chicago
route 66 absolutely DOES exist. it's not indicated on maps, but it exists. i drove it from LA to texas last summer.
http://www.historic66.com/
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2009 04:43 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
Okay dude, you HAVE to finish this, this is amazing and I'm HOOKED. Seriously this is so different to anything I have ever read, wow amazing!
Date: March 12, 2009 04:29 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
So good deerinthepark ...I hope you're going to finish it!
10 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2009 02:25 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
hey, where's the end of this!?!?!??!
Date: November 11, 2008 07:10 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
Did you forget about us? :(
Date: August 12, 2008 10:56 am Title: In the Night
Roy called? Wow...not too quick on the uptake, is he? I wish Pam would stop messing with Jim, though.
Date: August 12, 2008 10:51 am Title: Reaching the Ocean
Uh oh. But I love that they seem to have crossed another barrier, that he made the first move this time.
Date: August 12, 2008 10:45 am Title: Las Vegas
I'm glad they finally talked. And I don't think there'd be anything wrong with putting off real life unti lthey got back to it.
Date: August 12, 2008 10:37 am Title: To Vegas
Although I do love good sex scenes, that one is sweet and intimate, too. I wonder when Jim is going to start forcing some of these issues...
Date: August 12, 2008 10:21 am Title: Denver
Very hot and sweet; I'm glad she got the courage to act on her feelings...at least some of them!
Date: August 12, 2008 10:07 am Title: Heading For Denver
Ack! How frustrating! But at least they're getting closer--that's something...
Date: August 12, 2008 09:56 am Title: Chicago
I like how you're building up the emotional intimacy before you take it farther. Good pacing.
Date: August 12, 2008 09:48 am Title: On The Road
I really like this. You can tell they want to say meaningful things, but the most important thing is that they are together. I like it when Pam takes a chance, too.
Date: August 12, 2008 09:42 am Title: Taking A Chance
I love the awkwardness and the hopefulness behind it. Very in character.
Date: August 12, 2008 09:39 am Title: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
That's a great beginning. That moment, between acting and not-acting, is very tense, but you leave us with some hope that there will be more. So...off to read it!
Date: May 10, 2008 01:42 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
Are you still going with this one? I really hope you are! You've just provided me with a lovely hour or so of escapism. At least this chapter didn't end in a cliffhanger, but still - last chapters would be good!
10 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 11:19 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
In dire need of an update. This and your other story "...accidental heartbreaks" are so well written and interesting and yes, in need of an update.
Date: March 04, 2008 08:47 pm Title: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
ahhh I love it and want more!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 05:41 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I'm so happy read this. Amazing as always. Thank you!
Date: February 26, 2008 04:35 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I love the way that they're talking but also not talking, and it doesn't matter that they're not talking about the stuff they're not talking about because they're mature enough to understand and move past it without hashing it out to death... if that makes sense? ;)
Also, I adored and giggled at the somewhat meta reference to the supply closet idea, being that at this point it's become a classic and sort of cliché fanfic technique (not intending offense to any writers who have used the supply closet - it's cliché but has also been done very well).
Date: February 26, 2008 04:23 pm Title: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
Still reading and was excited to see an update. I hope things stay like they are when they go home!
Date: February 26, 2008 12:07 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
You wonder if anyone is still reading this story? Some of us breathe for it to update. Love it. (I don't want them to go home ... )/pouting