Reviews For Instincts
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Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2006 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1

After writing Jim/Jan for the first time, I did a curiousity search and found this. I love it, it's a great portrait of how they relate, without it being romantic. Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)  I am not a natural fiction writer by any mean, but I was pretty pleased with the final product, which is not usually the case. :)  I love Jan and Jim so it was fun to write.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh.  So lovely Gen!  The smuttier versions of this scenario certainly entertained but HelpfulInadvertentlyMatchmakingJan is my all time favorite.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I love Matchmaking Jan so much too.

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well done!  I love that you filled in the blanks between the confession and kiss.  And that you gave us a reason why Jim was in the office (and not stalking Pam, like some silly people think).

Author's Response: Yep.  I can't buy that Jim would be in the office on purpose after Pam turned him down.  He is not a stalker, nor that much of a sucker for punishment!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this story. Fit completely between those two scenes, for both Jim and Jan. Awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you! I like filling in the blanks in the episodes. :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

"I prefer to reason things out, but sometimes, a gut feeling is all you have to go on.”  Great advice from Jan, similar to Michael's advice to Jim on the Booze Cruise.



Author's Response: I'd like to think Jan would be supportive of Jim, whom she appears to like. :)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice.  I like this, even if it means no confession.



Author's Response: Actually, I envisioned this a missing scene between the Confession and the Kiss.  Jim is so distraught because he was shut down, and Jan helps him regain a bit of faith in his instinct that Pam does have feelings for him, which leads to the kiss.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, that's a compelling "ten minutes" scenario. It sounds so much like them- great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooo... good one! Jan bucking up our boy!

Nice! 



Author's Response: Thank you.  It had bugged me how Jim went from all teary to confident to kiss Pam so I had to make up a little scenario for it.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice moment. The question Jim poses is perfect.

Author's Response: I figure that is the only question he could be asking himself after finally taking the plunge and being rebuffed.

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1

The perfect way to fill in that blank in Casino Night...very believable.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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