8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude! This ending blew my mind.
Wonderful job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you liked the story and the ending!
7 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun twist at the end! But poor Roy. Oh, well!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heh...good story. People have no idea what we tellers hear, do they? Oh, the stories I could tell, if it wasn't for that pesky "financial privacy" thing. Great story, great ending...loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you for responding. I was afraid I was doing a disservice to tellers everywhere. Glad to hear it was somewhat realistic. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Didn't expect that at the end, loved it :)
Author's Response: Happy to hear you enjoyed the ending. Thanks for leaving feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was awesome! Great dialogue for Pam/Roy, great inner monologue for the teller.
And the reveal! Rock on. Loved it ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, nomadshan. Thanks for commenting on the dialogue - I get nervous about characterization.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, zing! Good one, TV_Buffy!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story! Appreciate the feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap! This was fun. :)
Author's Response: Hee. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great ending! You got me. I loved all of Jessica's speculation about Pam and Roy.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked Jessica and her thoughts!
8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Woo! Wonderful way to end it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Didn't see that ending coming. Great!
Author's Response: Glad you were suprised. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great! What a cute surprise at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I think this story really turned out great. I have a lot of love for the ending. Awesome. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your help (and feedback). The ending is near and dear to my hear as well. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was wonderful. I love your twist at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks for you feedback! Glad you liked the ending.