8 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. I liked their paralell parallel thoughts and totally loved the ending. Congrats on your first fic - I hope we see more from you soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you kaystar!! I'm glad you enjoyed... and I've got another story rolling around in my head.. this writing stuff is addicting! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 31, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really felt the tension building during the story. Very well done!! It's hard to believe this is your first fanfic! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence, Annika. Tension was the exact emotion I was going for..so I'm glad you felt it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 31, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
See? Now this is more like it! This is how it should have gone. It's very good -- first one? Nice job. I loved that Jim took another peek back at Pam to see her staring, and that Karen finally realized she was fighting a losing fight.
And if Pam had only done something like this, instead of waiting until Beach Day. Yikes.
Good job; write more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Too Late Kev. Yeah, its my first fic..but I'd love to write more soon. Thanks again!
Date: December 31, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
A good snap would have saved us ALL a lot of grief! I really like how you wrote the alternating perspectives.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing lisahoo... and I hear you about the grief! That was such a looong season!
Date: December 31, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was great ! why couldn't it have really been like this ? :P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, dundermifflinisdani... I always wished that the episode ended this way... so I guess I just created my own little universe instead! Thanks again for reading! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2007 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked that! Oh how I wish that The Negotiation had really ended that way. The rest of S3 would have been so much less angsty! I can't believe that was your first fic! Great job!
Author's Response: Me too, Abigail! I always had such high hopes for that episode! Thanks for the review and the kind words! :)