Date: February 09, 2019 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy the parallel beats of the primary story and the secondary one. Well done.
Date: April 26, 2017 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your writing style so much. Very lyrical.
Date: June 23, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was gorgeous. So subtle and vaguely melancholy. I was holding my breath the entire time.
Date: September 10, 2006 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this. Really like getting more dimension on Darryl.
Date: September 04, 2006 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Roy saying that he shouldn't have left Pam there in the dress with Jim but then coming to the realizaition that it wasn't the dress. And how sweet that Darryl would buy a ticket for Pam to go to Australia.
Date: September 04, 2006 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, I like. Darryl is way cool, and there's not enough fic about him. He would make a rockin' fairy godfather.
Date: September 04, 2006 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely--suprising, yet perfectly believable and in character.
The ending made me swoon.
Date: September 04, 2006 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This. Is. So. Cool.
Roy and Darryl, and their barely-there Boy Love! Darryl as the fairy godmother! The Captain!
I dug this, and dug it hard.
Date: September 04, 2006 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your Darryl so much. This is awesome. I'm glad you had fun writing it; it shows.
Date: September 04, 2006 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm impressed. Very original and creative. Not to mention well-written.