Date: January 08, 2008 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Painful but beautifully written. Ouch.
8 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2008 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Yet they still see each other everyday and it hurts to look at him with a piece of her missing so she’ll keep his heart for awhile, for the comfort."
Beautifully written but so heartbreakingly sad.
Date: January 04, 2008 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooo, i'm very interested. more???
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
How can I give you love when you've taken it away!!? How?!
As heartbreaking as it is, i love your prose. Beautifully written :) as you destroy my hopes and dreams.
Date: January 04, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just wow. Beautifully written and so poignant.
"It reminds her of that night when he shoved all this bloody mess into her hands, asking her to take it and deal with the guilt. He didn’t know he’d walked away with her soul stuck to his shoe."
What an absolutely spot on description. That floored me.
8 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
"It reminds her of that night when he shoved all this bloody mess into her hands, asking her to take it and deal with the guilt. He didn’t know he’d walked away with her soul stuck to his shoe."
That is just superb imagery right there!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. such a powerful, moving story. great job, even if it did leave me feeling like jim just broke up with ME. haha.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniff* this was both so beautiful and so depressing.
9 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why do you insist on bringing the hurt like this? Why? What'd we ever do to you, huh? :P
I kid.
Sort of.
I want to be mad at this story. I really do. I want to want it to move away and never call me again. But I can't be like that, because it's got so many beautiful images in it.
Darn you! :P