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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 08:37 am Title: but it's still about her

Aw, poor Jim!  This makes me feel his pain, definitely.  Good job.  (Poor aching Jim!)  I love the last little paragraph.

Is Martin perhaps Martin Freeman of the British Office?  He is in my book. ;) 



Author's Response: well - i love aching jim. and i love writing it too, but i think it's more fun to read. i don't know if it's the same martin, but it could be!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2008 09:48 pm Title: but it's still about her

"June 10th was almost over in the U.S. and he still ached all over."

Such a beautifully sad line. I really enjoyed this.

 



Author's Response: thank you!!

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2008 01:44 pm Title: but it's still about her

Aww, sad, but I loved it. I wonder if anything would've been different if Jim had gone to Australia. *ponders*

Author's Response: i don't know. but i keep pondering all of these AU ideas... it's kind of dangerous... thanks for the feedback.

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