Date: January 27, 2008 03:13 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
I just read this today. Don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. Maybe some are like me who just figured out how to write a review. :) Anyway, You're doing a great job and I've gotten butterflies in my stomach more than a few times while reading it. I can't wait for your next update. Keep them coming! :)
7 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2008 12:59 pm Title: Inventory part 1: don't break the sugar bowl
"Jim seemed to squint at her features and he saw that sadness and anger were painted among her face. Like the artist forgot that happiness and love was in life too."
That was beautifully written. I'm really enjoying this.
Date: January 27, 2008 12:44 pm Title: painting
I'm actually suprised that people aren't bombarding this story with reviews! It's is utterly AMAZING! i really love it, especially this chapter!
Date: January 26, 2008 11:48 pm Title: painting
no way. The story is great ;-) Don't worry and keep it up, I'm loving it!!
8 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2008 11:32 pm Title: painting
Actually I'm really enjoying it. I think your Pam is spot-on. I like the twist with Jim volunteering Pam's art for a show.
Can't wait for more ;-)
Date: January 26, 2008 08:59 pm Title: painting
awhhh ! keep goinggg ! i love this (: great job !
Date: January 26, 2008 08:53 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
This is a good story please continue.
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2008 08:44 pm Title: painting
I love this story so far! I've been reading it and yet to review.. :( Great work! Pam is so very confusing sometimes and you captured it all really good. =)
Date: January 26, 2008 08:40 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
this is a good story. many are visitors to the site and therefore can't leave comments. but this is a nice story, and i hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of commenting. i hope you finish!
Date: January 24, 2008 10:12 am Title: rooms and paper cuts
I'm still reading this story, and I'm still loving it. You're still writing a great story, and I still think you deserve more recognition. Keep up the great work!
Date: January 24, 2008 09:52 am Title: games and pastels
This was excellent!
B
Date: January 24, 2008 03:55 am Title: games and pastels
again... i absolutely love this!
Oh.. and Battlestar Galactica starts with a B :D
Haha!
9 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 07:33 pm Title: rooms and paper cuts
Sorry I have not been reviewing, but I really like this story. I am interested to see what happens next! I really think this observation is well written and cool:
Life was too much like rooms; a series of rooms. And who she got stuck with in those rooms; added up to whatever her life would be.
Fate had a funny way of sticking her in rooms with Jim all the time.
Date: January 23, 2008 06:21 pm Title: rooms and paper cuts
moreeeeee ! this is GREAT ! :)
Date: January 23, 2008 04:35 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
I really like where this is going, and how you show that they can't really go on that long showing that they are angry at each other. I am looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: awww thank you :D i'm glad ur enjoying it
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2008 06:43 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
Really good stuff here...a little bolder Jim than we usually see, but still believable. I'm definiely invested.
Date: January 20, 2008 06:26 pm Title: inventory part 2: rain
i have been jumping to read this every time i see an update. i'm really enjoying it and i can't wait to see how it turns out! please hurry and add another chapter soon! i love this!
Author's Response: aww thank you :DDDD i'm glad ur enjoying it
Date: January 19, 2008 02:26 pm Title: Inventory part 1: don't break the sugar bowl
This story deserves more reviews! It's really good. I like where you're taking it. Keep going! Be encouraged!!! Keep writing, and the reviews will come.
Author's Response: lol aww thank you =] and you know what keeps me going? te people who DO write the comments. so it doesn't matter how many i get. the ones who reply...gets the updates lol thanks =]]]]
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 11:28 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
You got me hooked. Hopefully when it's all said and done, Roy will be the only one fuming. Looking forward to more.
Date: January 18, 2008 09:48 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
Me likey. Can't wait for more. Excellent stuff!
Date: January 18, 2008 08:59 am Title: The Forgotten Papers
I really like this one so far. I hope you countinue soon.
8 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2008 07:11 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers
"She was afraid if she made eye contact with Roy too long Jim’s words would ring in her ears…and she would realize swaying is dancing."
Awesome line, awesome beginning. I can't wait to see where you go with this because anger this intense just has to lead to something good, right?