6 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 07:26 pm Title: Why ARE you here Pam?
Nice ending. S3 could have been much happier if they'd followed your direction!
Author's Response: LOL, so true. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
6 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Always going to be like this
Congrats on your first fic!!
"God, she hated how he snored. It was like some strange call of the wild. She’d lost count of the number of times she’d wanted to stuff his socks in his enormous, gaping mouth and affix a piece of duct tape to it. But she figured a plea of his snoring was annoying as hell and driving me to insanity wouldn’t work to her advantage in a murder trial.
I know this wasn't meant to be funny, but I really LOL at the paragraph above. Great description!
Author's Response:
I'm glad it made you laugh. I was trying to be funny at that point. When I'm mad, I think things like that and then laugh at myself so I figured my Pam would too. lol
Thank you for reading this story.
Date: January 19, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Why ARE you here Pam?
I liked this a lot...the quick pacing worked, and I found Pam's epiphany realistic. I do think, though, that Jim would have quickly become very hopeful the second she showed up at his door under these circumstances, rather than assuming she was just there to lean on him again. That's just a minor complaint, though; I enjoyed this a lot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback. I was a little worried about how quick the timing was, so I'm happy that you liked it. I agree that Jim might be hopeful when Pam shows up, but when she starts ranting about Roy, he'll be a little crestfallen. I might go back and make that change.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this and leave a comment. My fav author on here, Stablergirl, always mentions you, so I'm happy to have made your notice! :)
Date: January 19, 2008 02:58 pm Title: Just drunk
So.. I think I love this fanfiction. Please update very soon, I will love you muchly! :]
Author's Response: All 5 chapters are in. Hope you enjoy them!