Date: January 23, 2008 05:55 am Title: Pam Gets Ready
Just read this along with the previous chapter. Very nicely done. I have to say that I like the idea of Pam having some new clothing choices in her closet. Also, I think you did a good job at conveying her nervousness and excitement.
Date: January 22, 2008 11:22 pm Title: Pam Gets Ready
OMG you can't stop there!!
Date: January 22, 2008 11:16 pm Title: The Interruption
That was very sweet. =)
Date: January 22, 2008 11:14 pm Title: The Break-Up
Awww poor Karen, I always feel bad for her. But eeee can't wait til the next chapter. =)
Date: January 22, 2008 03:43 am Title: The Realization
The entire story is so very well written and I love the way you began the first Chapter "Realization":
All thought stopped when the note fell out of the folder and into his lap.
“Don’t forget us when you’re famous – Pam”
It was the sum of what he’d be leaving behind.
Her.
Her smile.
Her friendship.
Her presence.
All the possibilities.
Very, very evocative.
Date: January 21, 2008 02:09 pm Title: The Interruption
I've really enjoyed this story. You have a clear, descriptive writing style. I like your interpretation of the events on that wonderful day! Looking forward to the first date set of stories.
Date: January 21, 2008 08:10 am Title: The Interruption
Very good! Keep going!
Date: January 21, 2008 07:42 am Title: The Realization
I really loved the story. I can't wait to read your series on the date.
Date: January 21, 2008 07:21 am Title: The Interruption
Fantastic first attempt! Looking forward to more from you, Lexiconiful!