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Reviewer: lovingthursdays Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2009 08:46 pm Title: Rings

Still hanging on and hoping you finish - it's so hard to wait!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I've been pretty stuck on the next chapter.  Just can't seem to get it moving the way I want it to go.  Thanks for hanging in there with me.

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2009 11:57 pm Title: Rings

Yay I'm your 400th reviewer! This story is probably my favorite fanfic story! I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Wow!  I can't believe this story actually has 400 reviews now.  Thanks!

I feel so lame about the delays in posting the next chapters.  Obviously, I've hit the dreaded block.  I haven't given up though.  I'll keep trying...

Reviewer: EJER Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 09:44 pm Title: Rings

This is the first fanfic I've ever read. A friend of mine sent it to me a few weeks ago because she understand all that medical jargon and I can't pronounce half of those words. In any case, we have both been checking back to see if it's been updated. We're heavily pondering what's engraved on Jim's ring!!! POST A NEW CHAPTER SOON PLEASE!!

Author's Response:

Well, welcome to the world of fanficdom, EJER!  I feel honored to have "been your first."  ;-)

You'll find a LOT of wonderful stories on this website if you poke around a bit.  I keep promising to update this story but always manage to find other things to do rather than write.  I have a good bit of the future chapters written already, so if I could just get the next one done ...

Oh, and please thank your friend for passing along my story!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 09:36 am Title: Rings

omg i am in love with this story. its so... cant even describe. i just hope to see more...and soon please =]

Author's Response: Thanks!  It feels great to leave someone speechless!

Reviewer: TheRealLifeHalperts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2009 11:20 pm Title: Rings

You have got to keep going with this story, I have been following it for a while and it is so good! You're writing is wonderful, fluid and easy to read. I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you!  for once I can say that I have been working on the next chapter ... instead of some far off future one.  I've been going back & forth about its structure but I'm writing now.  Hopefully not TOO long till I can send to the beta posse and post it.

Reviewer: EJER Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2009 10:47 pm Title: Prologue

So, when can we expect this new exciting chapter full of interesting things??

Author's Response:

Not for a few days ... my Young Blood is coming home from Africa today!!  What a great Mother's Day present, yes?  I think I'll be a bit distracted for the next few days...

Thanks for leaving the little nudge.  I'm framing the structure of the next chapter.  Still writing, I promise!  I'm not just letting it sit...

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2009 12:12 pm Title: Rings

I love this chapter. I don't remember what the ring had engraved. Did you tell us earlier? I wish they would just admit their feelings for each other.

I really enjoyed Pam's enthusiastic reading - and Jim seeing it happen.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Pam & Jim are kinda slow though.  Admissions of feelings ... well probably a few chapters ahead before we get there!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2009 04:31 pm Title: Rings

Woo-hoo! A new chapter! I was thrilled to see this, and loved it. I'm enjoying that Jim is finding comfort in Pam's presence, I guess, at a time when he would probably be freaking out.

I really need to go back and read this from the beginning, because I can't remember if I'm supposed to know what's on the inside of his ring, or not. I'll be doing that this weekend!

Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  And, no, I haven't told you what's inside the ring yet.  It's been a while though, so maybe you still want to read those old chapters.  Geez, I started this story sixteen months ago!  I really AM going to finish it though.  I promise.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2009 10:33 am Title: Rings

Yipee!!! I was so excited to see an update on this story! I like that Jim and Pam seem to be getting closer. The unison stuff was really adorable. I can't wait to see how it all turns out. I hope I don't have to wait so long for an update next time ;) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot SPaT.  I hope I don't keep you waiting too long for the next chapter, either!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 11:44 pm Title: Rings

Aww, how lovely. And of course yippee to a new chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 05:29 pm Title: Rings

I was so thrilled to see a new chapter posted!  Yay you. I don't find a story taking forever to finish a bad thing - for those of us who are enjoying this story, we want it to keep on going!  Great job, can't wait to see what's next!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for being so kind-hearted about my pokey posting. :)

I've got some interesting plans for the next chapter.  I hope you'll like the next one!

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 02:24 pm Title: Prologue

I was so excited to see that there was an update! I'm so into this story. I can't wait until the next post. You're a great writer,keep it up! =D

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I hope to post the next one much more quickly than the last one.  (But I always say that, don't I?)

Reviewer: Gorkerina Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 12:46 pm Title: Prologue

I was so pleased to see you'd updated this - read it on my BlackBerry this morning, in bed with a cup of tea :oP
I love tthis story so much and I can't wait to find out what the ring inscription is! ;o)

Author's Response:

It never fails to amaze me when people say they are reading these stories on Blackberries.  Oy!  Such a little screen to read a lot of text.  It does sound yummy, though, to be enjoying MTT in bed with a cup of tea!

Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Feedingmyaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 10:22 am Title: Rings

This update made my day. I love this story!!!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad I added a little smile to your day.

Reviewer: czarag00 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 09:52 am Title: Rings

I was so excited to see a new chapter today, and you did not disappoint! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 07:29 am Title: Rings

Always so happy when you update this, VB.  I re-read the last chap to bring me up to speed (and because I love that interaction between Jim and Larissa).  Loved this one, too.  Very sweet scene with Pam and Jim's dad.  I'm dying for Jim to find out what's inscribed in his ring!  They're acting like a married couple.  Wake up and smell the coffee, dummies! 

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, NanReg!  callisto's got me rethinking how I'm going to present the whole ring thing ... so maybe I don't have that part written, after all.  We'll see.

I like newlywed Pam & Jim, even if they're just pretending.  Hope we get to see it on the show, soon.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 06:25 am Title: Rings

I was so excited when I saw this update!  You are amazing the way you make the words come to life for me.  I will wait patiently for your next update.

Author's Response:

Wow.  I make words come to life for you?  That is such a nice thing to say.  I really appreciate it.  A lot!

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 06:21 am Title: Rings

I am so glad to have this story back. I went back and reread all of it a little while ago and I'm amazed at all of the detail you've got packed in here. I love your characterizations and think they are spot on. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review.  I love, love, LOVE your stories, so to get a compliment on my characterizations from you ... well, it means a lot to me.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 05:52 am Title: Rings

Guh.  Pam & Jim talking about wedding rings.  *melts*  So happy to see you have your mojo back.

"it's a date" [/fangirl squee]



Author's Response: Thanks, lisahoo.  I'm hopin' I have my mojo back!  I have another coupla chapters to write before I start to get to the ones that are patiently waiting on the hard drive.  I'm gonna keep at it!

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2009 04:01 am Title: Rings

Yeah... so I am Super Excited about the new chapter!

Pam is the sweetest thing... the way she enthusiastically read to her pretend FIL, and the way she was so happy when she noted the change in Mr.Halpert's temperature. She is undoubtedly awesome, Jim's parents aren't gonna like her, they will LOVE her!

Jim... SIGH.. always HOT, gotta love the way he leans in a doorframe, all tall and elegant. I love the way he invited Pam to lunch, calling her his wife. You know, that after witnessing Pam take such good care of his father, he was proud to be able to refer to her as that, even if it all a sham.

This day, for them, is going really well. Wrapped together as they slept, a flirty morning at the hotel, Jim's mom doing well enough to move to a different floor and waking up, his dad warming up and possibly losing some tubes and drains, not to mention MORE FLIRTING for our fave pretend newlyweds.

But I gotta know what Jim's ring says... It is K I L L I N G me!!

Thanks for updating, it really made me excited, and that clearly means when I review, I'll go on and on, with run on sentences and lots of inappropriate punctuation.

Another chapter soon would be exciting too...

Author's Response: I'm really excited that you were so excited!  Thanks for the review.   You gave me a BIG smile!

Reviewer: bcd Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 11:48 pm Title: Prologue

Yay!! Thanks for the update! I'm really looking forward to how Jim's parents react (oh and another night in the hotel!).

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 11:05 pm Title: Rings

So glad to see an update.Great chapter and I look forward to Mr. Halpert improving and Pam spending the day with Mrs. Halpert.Should be interesting!


Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I hope it will be an interesting day, indeed.  But ... we still have to get through the night, don't we?

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 09:50 pm Title: Rings

Loved it, can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 09:18 pm Title: Rings

Vampiric Blood! So so so happy to see an update! This chapter was so sweet. And Pam doing the voices was adorable. I'm also getting super curious as to what is engraved on Jim's ring! Looking forward to more :) -spencer

Author's Response: Glad you liked dramatic Pam!  The ring ... well, that will have to wait a little while longer.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2009 09:10 pm Title: Rings

well, i have to say it's always worth the wait. i'm always excited to see where they're going next :) nice chapter too. i want to tell you to get them to move it along, but they're totally in character, so i can't complain. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  And thanks for being patient with the slow-developing relationship I'm building with Pam & Jim.

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