10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 07:54 am Title: In My Life
Aww...that was so sweet. I knew there was going to be some kind of twist so I was getting worried but the ending was perfect. :)
Date: January 23, 2008 09:00 am Title: In My Life
Aww, that was adorable!! So very sweet, like candy. =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It was very sweet.
8 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 05:41 am Title: In My Life
Oh! You made my heart stop for a minute there! Nice job. Very lovingly written.
Author's Response: Really? I never thought I could do that. Thanks for saying so and for the review.
Date: January 23, 2008 05:09 am Title: In My Life
A lovely, tender moment. My only critique would be not to put so many warning labels on it- I went into this story expecting it not to be any good because you told me it wouldn't be! It was nice to be mistaken. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I took your advice and changed the warning. Now it just says it's unbeta'd so there could be minor mistakes. Thanks for the review and I am glad you liked it.
Date: January 22, 2008 11:54 pm Title: In My Life
This was brilliant. And we should take a poll. Who else thought it was Toby for like, the first paragraph? Awesome, as Kelly would say.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you were surprised at the end that it was Pam. I never even thought to write the story from the point of view of Toby I was thinking that people would think it was Karen or some other woman.
Thanks for the review I am glad you liked it.