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Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 02:53 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

*claps*  I love it!!!!

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 02:48 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

Oh my gosh!!! I love this story!!!!

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

Wendy Blue, I love you!!!

This story is sooo cute; it's brillant!!!! I love Enchanted and The Office!!!

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 07:24 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

no cavities here, but I DID just brush my teeth and floss. Just enough fluff. :)

I thought that it was so cute; and I don't know if this is the ending, but it works great as one...it works so well. It's just so easy to picture the two of them in this fic. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 04:05 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

Never too much sweet : )

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 03:43 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

Whoa.  You know there is a reason they don't allow Jim to wear green on the show, right?  Too much pretty.

http://mtt.just-once.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=48&pos=3

I rest my case. 

Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 03:34 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

I have quite the sweet tooth and this hits the spot. I really love this series. After a long day its nice to read it and smile. Thanks!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

Oh, their kids would have the most beautiful eyes! Happy sigh!

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2008 07:54 am Title: Dedicate a song with words meant just for you

Great song choice for Jim to sing to Pam (although cringe-worthy, for sure, in this setting).... one of my all time favorites and the lyrics are so fitting. "I'll be love's suicide" -- "I'll be better when I'm older" -- and "I'll be the greatest fan of your life".... and on and on. Great Job. Can't wait for upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2008 07:39 am Title: Dedicate a song with words meant just for you

I love that song!  You had me cringing AND smiling. 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2008 07:36 pm Title: Dedicate a song with words meant just for you

Michael Scott + karaoke + Jim & Pam = gold. True story. :)

I'm loving all these little scenes, Swiff. You are doing a fantastic job with them all. 

Also, I appreciate you mentioning the title of the song. I admit to not knowing it. And with that admission, I'll just shuffle off to the old folks' home... be a dear, and hand me that walker, will you? :) 

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

What I would give to get a dance lesson from Jim Halpert.

You and me both, sister! These little chapters make me so excited and so heartbroken at the same time, which I suppose is the point! Great stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, they've been fun to write :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 03:54 pm Title: Take you out dancing just so he can hold you close

zzzzziiip!

Know what that was the sound of? That was the sound of me zipping my lips about my opinion of whether Jim can really dance. ;)

Because this is your story, Swiff, and I will NOT be the one to harsh your mellow! Instead, I will point out some of the wonderfully cute things about this chapter, such Jim's consterflusterification (what? It's a word, look it up) at the words "passion party," Pam's almost immediate "yes," and Pam's simuldorkisness (Again, it's a real word, I swear) when they first start to dance. :)

See? And not once did I say anything about whether Jim can dance. ;)  



Author's Response: Mose, I appreciate you zipping your lid.  Who knows, Jim could be a great dancer!  I mean, look at all those guys on Dancing with the Stars.  They are totally straight *cough*  Either way, glad you enjoyed this flufferonious (I can make up words too) piece and thanks for all the support!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2008 06:34 pm Title: Send you yellow flowers when the sky is gray

What a sight to come home to.  Sigh.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2008 06:05 pm Title: Send you yellow flowers when the sky is gray

Oh, Miss Pam, the sunflowers are only the beginning... 

I haven't seen Enchanted, but I'm loving this nonetheless. 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Send you yellow flowers when the sky is gray

Awww... how cute is this? I'll tell you: as cute as a row of freshly-planted sunflowers!

I love the little moments with Pam in this chapter, like how it's her birthday, dammit!, and how the weather usually cuts her a break on the rain. So nicely done.

And is it bad that I feel for Roy in this story? Maybe I'm just looking at him through a post S3 lens, but I sorta feel bad for the big dumb oaf, ya know? :)

Excellent chapter, Swiff! Excellent! 

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 09:39 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

Aww I

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 08:24 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

ooh so great WendyBlue!!  And Enchanted is amazing too! 

send you yellow flowers when the sky is gray
he'll find a new way to show you a little bit every day

Oh I hope you continue on with this song because this song just screams them!  So heartbreaking especially when Jim realizes she's engaged.  And the end about getting better at ignoring things?  Awesome line. 

OK, can't wait to see more :)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 04:09 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

I am not kidding you Wendy Blue I wrote this story and never posted it...not this story, but the concept for sure.

I can even show it to you if you don't believe me...But yours is hella better so it's all good. 

The Enchanted soundtrack is just so very inspiring you know? 



Author's Response: Aww, well now I feel like a thief!  An inadvertent one, but a thief nonetheless.  I suppose even if I did steal your idea, I'm glad you find it worthwhile :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 04:00 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

"Like a light went out or maybe just got dimmed."

Great description of what Jim must have looked like after he realized she was engaged. Can't wait to see where you go with this. 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Pam pretty much makes the boy glow, no doubt about it.  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 02:25 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

I agree. I'm diggin this concept, and I can't wait to see where you take this. I finally! saw Enchanted over Christmas, so I'm definitely looking forward to this.

Author's Response: Isn't it a fantastic movie?  So glad you're enjoying it so far, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 02:20 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

This is a brilliant idea! I love this so far! And I agree, Amy Adam's hair is amazing.


Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it so far! :)

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 01:39 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

So, I'm one of those who hasn't seen Enchanted. But I think I'll be okay following along.

This was an adorably angsty little glimpse into their first "date that wasn't really even a date."  That image of Jim's eyes falling from hers to the ring to the table? Yeah. Niiiice. :)

I shall be looking forward to more of your usual brilliance! 



Author's Response: Mose, I really do think you'd enjoy Enchanted.  Disney is able to make fun of itself and does it in a really charming way.  But enough of the movie review, I want to thank you for YOUR review!  You know how much your opinion means to me so it thrills me to hear that you're on board with this latest adventure!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 01:37 pm Title: Leave a little note to tell you you are on his mind

I'm just going to step away and get some popcorn and I'll be right back, ok?  I know I'm going to like this : )

Author's Response: Ooo, get me some too please! :)  I do hope you like it and thanks so much for reading!

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