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Reviewer: A Little Stitious Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 01:01 pm Title: The Essay

This was so adorable, RA!!  I'm glad to see you back around here, and I hope to see your great work around here more often. :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 07:32 pm Title: The Essay

This was so sweet. I love the idea of Jim and Pam as grandparents - Jim would make such a perfect grandpa. And I loved this part:  "I'm not that old, but still. At my age, you mark things clearly."

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 12:20 pm Title: The Essay

I really adored this story. It had just the right note of sweetness and just genuine...love to it all. I can fully imagine the scene in the toy store. Your way with words really spun this all beautifully. 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 08:06 am Title: The Assignment

What a lovely story!  Really beautiful.  The BIG conversation and surrounding interaction in the toy store just melts my heart.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 05:28 am Title: The Essay

Awww, how sweet!! I'm a little sad that the bunny didn't survive, but you're right, it wasn't important. =)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 05:25 am Title: The Essay

Wow!  I write a review and poof, another chapter appears.

This is a beautiful picture you are painting of future Jim and Pam.  I love thinking of Jim as a "goofy Grandpa".

Will there be more big moments shared?

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 05:01 am Title: The Assignment

Ra!  It's so great to see a story from you again!

This one looks very intriguing.  I love future Jim and Pam stories and I smiled when Pam called him "My Jim".

Looking forward to finding out about the purple stuffed crazed bunny.

PS. Drop me a line sometime to let me know what you've been up to



Author's Response: Hi, Bees! Thanks for the review. This one isn't so much a story, just a bitty piece of fluff that I wanted to write since Pam was in such dire straits in my last story. ;) I'll drop a line...been MIA for awhile. Good to hear from you! :)

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