1 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2020 04:06 pm Title: Part Two
Love this. And it supports my personal headcanon that the cameras set back Jim and Pam by a LOT.
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 11:15 pm Title: Part Two
Great story! I really love it when Jim and Pam sneak off at parties, whether or not they're together or cheating.
10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2008 08:16 am Title: Part Two
Wow, I enjoyed that, that was really good. And that sex part.. wow. THAT was hot. If I were home I would be taking a cold shower right now....
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2008 08:27 am Title: Part Two
Wow. Just wow. That's all. Soooo great. And I loved the ending, it was just silly enough ;-)
8 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2008 06:14 am Title: Part One
I really enjoyed this story a lot--it wasn't just smut (although that part was very good), but really great character development. I loved how you wove awareness of the cameras into the story, even though the cameras weren't actually present.
Great story! (And I thought the ending was adorable, not silly at all.)
Date: February 14, 2008 06:06 am Title: Part Two
Very hot scene in the laundry room. They might want to try it on the washer with the washer on for extra added fun if you continue this.
Date: February 13, 2008 08:46 pm Title: Part One
WOW. What a fantastic story. This last chapter just about killed me lol. I love how you analyze everything from Jim/Pam's pov plus their views of the cameras. Really, really excellent story, thanks so much!
Date: February 13, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Part One
oh mamma, this was hot. god damn
Date: February 13, 2008 07:24 pm Title: Part Two
Silly is just fine. You saved us all the heartache of S3, and we get our Jammy love fest. Who doesn't love that?
Loved this in particular: when someone's scrutinizing you so closely, it's hard not to take a good look inside yourself. The observations about the cameras and how aware they are of them are just gold.
I saw this over on LJ & I'm glad you posted it here at MTT!
8 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2008 06:45 pm Title: Part Two
I don't think the ending was silly at all! I thought it was perfect - the good guy got the girl. Who saw that coming? (TWSS). Seriously, I love the way the end mirrored the beginning - same question, same bride, different grooms. And I'd be remiss if I didn't tell you what a super hot laundry room smuff-fest you wrote. So darn hot. Whew. Great job!!
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2008 06:41 pm Title: Part Two
Holy Moses! Nothing like hot laundry room sex to put a smile on my face ; )
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2008 06:08 am Title: Part One
Yow! Love that ending! Good story. I like the references to the camera, where it would be, what it would capture. Looking forward to Part Two.
Date: February 13, 2008 12:46 am Title: Part One
Lately I've found myself moving away from Office fic because nothing has really been grabbing me...and then I read this. And I am so so so back on board! I'm absolutely loving this fic and I can't wait to read more.
Date: February 12, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Part One
I remember soon as I read the line about Roy saying Jim was a lucky man, I thought 'wow, the only thing this fandom lacks is swinger stories'. And then there is Jim and Pam hooking up in the laundry room, and we're basically Roy/Katy away from that.
To which I say, rock on with your bad self.
Can't wait for more.
Date: February 12, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Part One
Guh, love the details about how conscious Jim and Pam are of the cameras and everything they catch. Not to mention Pam getting a little 'fancy and new' in the laundry room. I guess fabric softener is very romantic. Cannot wait to see how Jim reacts to her shutting the door.
Date: February 12, 2008 08:05 pm Title: Part One
Whew!!! THAT was awesome. I seriuosly was not expecting that last line....brilliant! I really can't wait for you to continue this
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 07:58 pm Title: Part One
Woah, where did this come from? Really well done.
Date: February 12, 2008 07:50 pm Title: Part One
Yum! Great start. Quite the cliffhanger. And I love the general feel of the whole party and Jim and Pam's following conversation - just random drunken talk. And I love how well you've managed to show how much the cameras are interwoven into their lives - they've spent so much time watching what they say, how they react, that they're thinking about them constantly, even when they're not there.
8 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Part One
"Eyes still on his, she steps toward the door that is still ajar, puts her hand on the knob.
And she pulls it all the way shut."
Ooooh. Great beginning! I can't wait to see where this is going.
Date: February 12, 2008 06:41 pm Title: Part One
I'm agreeing with pam_beesly. I was totally expecting a "Pam ran out of the room and then was really awkward" fic, but she closed the door! *squee*
Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 06:23 pm Title: Part One
I read this over on LJ and loved it. So good! I can't wait for the conclusion.
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 06:06 pm Title: Part One
Ah! You can't stop there!! haha. This was great- can not wait to see what happens next!
8 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 05:58 pm Title: Part One
Ooh! I did not expect that! More please!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 05:32 pm Title: Part One
Holy mackerel. This is won. Der. Ful.
9 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Part One
She touches her lips with the pads of her fingers. Eyes still on his, she steps toward the door that is still ajar, puts her hand on the knob.
And she pulls it all the way shut.
That's seriously awesome. The majority of fic writers would have had her leave, so I love that you made her stay. I look forward to reading more. :)