Date: October 27, 2017 06:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Jollyholly, no one has commented on this story in 9 years! Thank you! Hope you read some of my others (as this was my very first). Also, I have a YA book out in bookstores: it's called Zenn Diagram. Not about Jim and Pam, but still a swoony romance.
Thanks again!
Date: May 19, 2008 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Insert big swooning sigh right here. I loved every little bit of it, but especially the lovely and romantic ending. Thanks for making me so happy!
Author's Response: This was my first fic ever . . . so glad you liked the sappy ending ;-) Thanks for reading!
Date: March 18, 2008 02:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw, I love a good romance, and this is a very good romance. I could feel that tightness in my chest just like Pam does. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Pixel! Glad the romance tightened up the chest -- always a good sign. I really appreciate your reading and reviewing!
Date: March 14, 2008 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh yay! Great story! I loved it. Write more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy! I certainly will!
Date: March 14, 2008 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
My heart was aching with Jim as he walked away from Pam, and I was gearing myself up the long, sad, ]season three separation, and then,,, What a pleasant surprise that he followed her! Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thanks Cathy! I've been very slow to respond to reviews, but I truly appreciate them! Thanks so much.
Date: March 14, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is wonderful so far! You really capture them well, especially Pam. Off to read your next chapter,,,
Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy. Glad Pam seems real . . . I never know for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 28, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw, this would have been a much happier merger day resolution for both of them. Lovely story!
Author's Response: I agree, Semby. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 27, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really beautiful written! Great for a first fic and you should definitely write more.
Author's Response: Thanks hues8! As you can see, I have. Sorry it took me so long to respond . . . I'm still figuring all this out! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: February 26, 2008 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow. That's all I can really muster now, but really. Wow.
I am soo in love with this. Wow.
Author's Response: Wow! This story is so flattered. Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 26, 2008 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is your first try? No way! I loved it! I can't wait to read anything else you put out there.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm SOOOO darn slow with my responses . . . I'm going to try to be better. Um, yes, this was my first fic attempt. However, I've been writing for years. Just not fic. But this is so much fun, and I love the immediate audience and feedback. So thanks for taking the time to read and review!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really, really well done. Beautifully paced and satisfying (TWSS, I Guess?) It just unfolded very naturally, and I appreciate the lack of bells and whistles or shocking plot twists. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon! That's kind of what I was going for -- short, sweet and to the point (TWSS???). Especially since it was my first one and I'm just sort of playing around. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: February 26, 2008 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Off to great start. I will read on for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, gotkona!
Date: February 26, 2008 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ah, if only The Merger had actually followed your scenario. Very well done! I really liked your idea about Pam wanting to, needing to scream in the aftermath of Casino Night and Jim's sudden departure...but being unable to let it out until she was basically scalding herself (and her inner demons) in the shower right before the wedding...pretty powerful passage. Hope to hear more from you!
Author's Response: Wow, Mr. Bill. Thanks for noticing ;-) I appreciate your nice comments!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow. I really enjoyed that. Just enough smattering of smut to make it believable, just enough fluff to make JAM. A++
Author's Response: ROJ, thanks. I was tempted to do more smut but . . . well, it didn't feel right in this story. So I'm glad it worked for you, too ;-)
Date: February 26, 2008 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow, wow -- this was fantastic, brilliant, really really loved it! Good job, looking forward to seeing more from you here!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! That means a lot! This is a new type of writing for me (fanfic), but I love it. How can you not like writing about Jim and Pam? Thanks for taking the time to comment.
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yowza! Fantastic! Forgot to mention--I love "Halpert-induced amnesia." Awesome : )
Author's Response: Hee. I could see having some Halpert-nesia. Wouldn't mind it at all, actually...
9 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was excellent...and still more to read! I'm so excited.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! You're my first reviewer -- how fun! Not sure how much more there is . . . I just didn't want to mark it complete yet ;-) Thanks for taking the time to comment.