1 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2019 10:53 am Title: Jim Who
I love this story. It has all the hallmarks of great JAM and a lovely semi-scifi premise thrown in. Thanks for writing it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2011 02:11 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Wow-- that was great! I don't know how I've missed this before, but I'm glad I stumbled upon it.
8 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2010 11:21 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Aw man, so trippy! I literally read that in twenty minutes, I could barely stop! So interesting and plot twisty; you have a talent for suspense, my friend:)
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2009 08:57 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
PERFECTION!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2009 08:55 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
AHHHH!!!
THIS IS AMAZING!
This is like, the 4th time I'm reading this story, and I just have to tell you that you did such a fantastic job with it!!!
Date: January 26, 2009 07:59 am Title: Jim Who
I don't think this is a weird idea- after all, when someone moves out of your inner circle they cease to exist for you in a way. So taking this to an extreme is veeeery interesting. I'm really glad this is already completed. :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
OMG!
WOW!
that was amazing!
holy cats!
i loved every word of it [all of the chapters]!
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2008 09:05 pm Title: then I can't remember caring for an hour or so
omg - i just - wow.
omg.
this is incredible.
bottom-line.
Date: March 28, 2008 04:44 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Excellent story. Very well done. Thanks for a great ride. TWSS. Again
Date: March 28, 2008 04:41 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
Wow! Awesome! I was unsure how you were gonna tie up the loose ends, but it looks like you're handling things masterfully. TWSS.
Date: March 27, 2008 09:24 pm Title: Jim Who
i really enjoyed this, alot! thank you!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 04:02 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
I loved how you wrapped up everything. It was a dream but not really a dream. I can't wait to read your next story.
Date: March 22, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
lol, great job. Wasn't expecting it to turn into a "dream." Awesome way to fix the casino night screw up
9 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2008 11:26 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Thanks for the wrap-up chapter. This was a very unique story - great job!
Date: March 22, 2008 07:40 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
love the ending!
Date: March 21, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Perfect ending!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 09:48 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Yay! Just what I was hoping would happen!
9 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 09:45 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Great ending. Thanks for clearing my muddled mind *blushes* : )
9 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 09:29 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
I loved this, ExtremelyGruntled. Well done!! This was a wonderful conclusion to your story, and I think you've done a fine job telling a fascinating, what's-gonna-happen-next kind of story. Great work!!
Date: March 21, 2008 09:00 am Title: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice
Whoa. I like that they both had the same freaky dream. And of course that Pam left Roy. Nicely done, all around, EG!
Date: March 17, 2008 09:01 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
i love it! not cheesy at all! i think the thing with AU is that you are allowed so much more freedom. so give them the ebenezer scrooge ending! those crazy kids deserve it.
Date: March 17, 2008 08:21 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
Whoa, that was unexpected! So was it all a dream? I'm so confused, heh ;)
Date: March 17, 2008 04:33 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
Oh, wow, there's a twist I was not expecting! Can't wait to see the final chapter ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2008 03:39 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
Nice little twist – taking us right back to Casino Night! I like it! I hope you feel like you have more chapters in you. I'd like to see how Pam handles Roy this time around.
Date: March 17, 2008 01:12 pm Title: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet
Ooh, nice title. I love that song.
Man, if I was Pam I'd be ticked that Jim didn't remember anything. Oh well, who doesn't love a chance to have a do-over.