1 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2023 02:52 am Title: Chapter 14
I enjoyed reading this as a whole!
1 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2023 02:34 am Title: Chapter 10
Very good!
Date: October 21, 2023 02:30 am Title: Chapter 9
You're working up the romantic tension very well!
Date: October 21, 2023 02:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Great aftermath scene.
Date: October 21, 2023 02:07 am Title: A Different Kind of 'I Can't'
Nice cliffanger. I also thought the transition between Pam returning from the boat deck and chatting with Katy later.
1 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2023 01:51 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables
Great set-up chapter, and Pam's increasing infatuation with Jim and the characterisation of Jim from her eyes were spot on! Only snag: 'she asked' doesn't need a capital letter.
1 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2023 01:48 am Title: Jim-a-thon
This is exactly how I picture Pam's sexual frustration. Great characterisation here!
1 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2023 01:32 am Title: Peeping Pam
Very funny! It's great to see an independent take on 2x09.
1 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2023 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oof🥵, I'm so happy Mark did not make an appearance at the end. This is too good!
1 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2023 01:26 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Angst and steam might be my favorite duo from now on!
Date: August 01, 2021 08:32 am Title: Chapter 14
Love this story!
1 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
damn, that was hot, well done
1 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
This is one I’ve come back to many times. It will always be a top favorite. (As are a few others from you.)
But what I wouldn’t give to have a companion piece written in jims POV.
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2009 11:57 am Title: Chapter 11
"OhmyGodohmyGod, she thought. I will never get tired of making love to this man."
I don't know why, but that sentence just... guh. makes me all tingly. no, not like THAT.
okay, maybe a little.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2009 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
i'm glad you decided not to turn roy into a complete jackass when they broke up, because he really is a good guy. sure, he lost his temper a few times, but all in all, a nice guy. i DO think that he was in love with pam, and vice versa. so again... thank you. "jackass roy" is just too cliche.
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2009 10:51 am Title: Chapter 14
i loved it! you really wrote this well... the alternate ending of the booze cruise didn't feel forced at all.
and i disagree about jim & pam's post-coital talk... i DO think it would be that effortless. that's just... them.
Date: November 20, 2008 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great ! Loved it !
Date: October 01, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't know how I missed this story, but I just read it. Wonderful! I like your take on Pam's feelings about Katy as well as all your delicious steam.
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
FANTASTIC!!!!!!
Date: September 12, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
I need me a Jim :(
Date: September 12, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
lol and then mark walks in...
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Okay this show needs to move to cable!
Date: September 12, 2008 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
*dead*
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
All I can say is... eeeeeppppp
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Because he wants more than that ahhhhhhhhhh *dies*