Date: April 16, 2008 09:03 am Title: Occhiate di Amore
This is such a sweet story already! Keep the chapters coming. You got the characters down. I like reading about Jim & Pam's first dates!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2008 09:03 am Title: Occhiate di Amore
Great job! I am really enjoying this one. I love reading Happy JAM fic!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I promise no angst will be coming in this story AT all.
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 07:54 am Title: Baci Appassionati
Fantastic Kerber!! I love it when fanfics can trigger images of the scenes in my mind. Yours did that! I could picture everything as I read it.
Author's Response: That's awesome RC, I'm really glad! I wanted it to seem really like 'them' and be able to picture this really happening. Thanks so much for the support, you and the JT peeps have been beyond stellar! ;)
Date: March 24, 2008 09:03 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
that was AWESOME, kerber! you're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Sista! ;) Thanks for the review and all the support, you and the JT crew have been unbelieveable!
Date: March 24, 2008 07:36 am Title: Baci Appassionati
kerber! Glad to see that you've taken the plunge and joined us in the fic pool! It's addictive, but then you already knew that. ;)
A good start to what looks like a fun story! Congrats and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: A review from the ficmaster himself, I'm honored! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
8 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 06:53 am Title: Baci Appassionati
Nice job! Very sweet. More soon, please?
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it -- hoping to have something new up this weekend!
Date: March 23, 2008 11:54 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
Wow...If you don't post another chapter soon, my brain might break. That was one of the best endings I've read. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the accolades! And please don't break your brain because of me ;) I'm hoping to have a new spiffy chapter up sometime this weekend.
Date: March 23, 2008 08:29 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
Great start to the story Kerber. I'm especially liking the Italian title due to the fact that I'm Italian and I love Italian food (the real kind and the Jam kind)
I also liked that Pam's thoughts and actions were more S2/3. Bossy FNB has been a little too much sometimes and I like to think her thoughts are still S2/3 Pam.
Awesome start. Update soon.
Author's Response: There's going to be a LOT more Italian coming throughout the story so you should be pretty happy. The JT crew's support on this has been unreal and beyond words so thank you so much! Hoping to have a new chapter polished up by this weekend.
Date: March 23, 2008 08:22 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
This feels very Jim & Pam. I love their conversations about their dates as if they were just talking as best friends. It's very real. Keep it up; I'll be reading!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - I'm happy you like it so far! I wanted to keep it 'real' between them and I'm very glad it came across that way.
Date: March 23, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
This is such a fun start, kerber!! I especially loved the last paragraph....oh so great! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Without the JT crew's support, I'd still be cowering in the corner afraid of this 'thing' I wanted to write. Now, I want to see more from you too!! :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
Chica II--This is simply a lovely start to a wonderful new story! I've read so many iterations and versions of this chapter over the past few days, but the real treat has been seeing it all come together to form this perfect first chapter. I've told you how concerned I am about the MTT "Fic!Drought" of 2008, but it's stories like this from authors like you that make me truly happy to see new work on our beloved site. You've done a fine job balancing the sweet and playful sides of Jim and Pam with the many mysteries they've yet to share, and I think this is a delicious tension that will be delightful to watch unfold. I can't wait for chapter two, so crack those knuckles and get crackin'! --Best, CH
Author's Response: Chica -- seriously, you're a rockstar there's no other way to say it! Thank you so much for all the support. I could not have a better beta to bounce and throw stuff around with.
Date: March 23, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
Aww, how romantic. Are they gonna say their "I love you's" in the new Italian place where the dry cleaners used to be? I can't wait. Those two are so cute teasing each other about their respective "dates".
Author's Response: Sort of kind of not really, but yes at the same time ;) Cryptic I know! Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you like it so far!
Date: March 23, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Baci Appassionati
Fabulous first chapter, kerber! You've really captured Jim and Pam's playfullness and I love the promise of an "I love you return".
I loved this part:
There were times she thought about telling him, but it just didn’t feel right. She thought about saying it so many times, in those moments when his hand slid against her side, pulling her closer to him or when his lips would brush against her neck, when she wanted to bring him closer, but she couldn't. The moment would die, his hand would fall away, and he would only smile.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Bees -- you are the best! Without you and the rest of the JT crew's support, I'd still be cowering in the corner and not out there writing! Hope to have chapter two up and done by this weekend!