Reviews For Morning Person
Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 
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Date: October 20, 2008 12:08 am Title: Morning Person
8 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 12:08 am Title: Morning Person
dirty pam lol
Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Morning Person
9 [Report This]Date: March 26, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Morning Person
This was wild! I'm still giggling. James Bond-Halpert and Beesly the sex kitten--too funny!
A wee bit o' constructive criticism first. First off, is it possible for you to re-post without the underlining? It's pretty distracting. Also a little distracting is jumping between first and second person (did I get that right? I think it's first and second--I think you probably know what I mean). Anyway, that aside, I really enjoyed this--hot but really funny, too. Love their banter--trying to be smooth but not being able to shut out the awkward, which is very in-character in my opinion. Nice job!