1 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2017 03:08 pm Title: When the Rain Breaks the Road
I was wondering if there were any fics covering this topic here and was please to find this. You handled this incredibly tough and emotional subject in a way that was both heartbreaking and hopeful. Thanks for writing this.
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2010 08:25 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
What a great way to end it. Welcome to the world little Miss. Halpert :D
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2010 08:22 pm Title: I Still See You There
The videos were a really great touch, it made it seem so real, and you could feel their pain :( brilliantly done!
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2010 08:09 pm Title: When the Flame Leaves Your Eyes
"He's gone, but my body doesn't know that. He should be here, and he would be hungry. But he's not! He's in a box and tomorrow I have to put him in the ground!"
That right there, THAT killed me. That was just wow... the wording was just so heartbreaking and real.
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2010 12:48 am Title: Are You Holding On?
This is heartbreaking, but written so beautifully. I really feel their pain in this!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2010 12:40 am Title: When the Rain Breaks the Road
How have I not read this?
Really interested to see where you're going with this!!!!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2010 08:24 am Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
I know I'm a little late on the bandwagon for this one, but it was simply incredible. I actually felt chills. The true power of this story lies in its ability to be so ground-breaking and touching in merely 5 short chapters. Excellent job
Date: January 26, 2009 07:49 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
This story absolutely broke my heart. Wow. The home movie in ch. 4 just killed me. I think it's good to read about these kinds of situations tho, because they do happen to thousands of people a year, and you wrote it spectacularly. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2008 09:11 am Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
Oh my God...this is the most incredible & heartbreaking story I have read in ages. Long after I've left the computer, I can't stop thinking about it, and I have to keep coming back and rereading the hardest-hitting parts. Him needing her to make something feel normal, the part where we find out what happened, "so we can bury our baby," -- pretty sure I let out an audible whimper when she cries about her body not knowing he's gone -- breakdown in the nursery, the *videos*, Will & Jim wearing matching looks...so, so achingly beautiful. The happy ending is just the icing on the cake. Incredible work.
Date: June 03, 2008 08:53 am Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
o wow..amazing..loved how jim is with the little baby girl...
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2008 06:31 am Title: When the Rain Breaks the Road
My grief bone is officially smashed. Thank you for making me cry first thing this morning. Thank goodness for happy endings!
Author's Response:
I think you are my first ever smashed grief bone...I'm really sorry. I hear that's pretty rough.
thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means everything.
Date: June 03, 2008 06:27 am Title: When the Rain Breaks the Road
Thank you for this wonderful heart breaking story. I am glad they were able to have a happy ending.
10 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2008 11:05 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
ahh!!!!
I loved it. this was so beyond amazing. YOU'RE beyong amazing! :D
Date: June 02, 2008 10:07 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
I'm sad we had to miss so much of Pam's pregnancy and their daughter's birth. There is so much there but I really love Jim noticing his actions and that they're all okay. I'm glad they could move on.
Author's Response:
Sorry for skipping over everything dear. I've never been good at writing pregnancy anything that didn't sound really cliche and dumb. And I also kind of felt like it would hurt the tone of the overall piece so I decided to leave it out.
But I really appreciate your reviews, they mean a lot :o)
9 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2008 07:31 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
The perfect ending to such a sad story. Good job.
Date: June 02, 2008 06:43 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
Nicely done, it was angsty, but good angsty....is that an oxymoron?
10 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2008 06:43 pm Title: You'll Find Out I'm There For You
It's not that I enjoyed your suffering, my friend, but rather the fruits of your suffering : ) What a great, uplifting ending. Excellent job.
Date: May 17, 2008 07:11 pm Title: I Still See You There
Wow you really know how to bring the tears...the videos got me the worst---the baby made the 'Jim face'....ugh how horrible for them. I'm hoping with the ending that things get happier from here.
Amazing job!
Date: May 17, 2008 03:16 am Title: I Still See You There
wow. sweet and wonderful and heartbreaking!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 09:47 pm Title: I Still See You There
I'm positive my heart broke while reading this. I acutally teared up.
Fantastic story. Truly. The emotions were amazing.
Date: May 16, 2008 09:40 pm Title: I Still See You There
I love this fic...it's so emotional and powerful, and I really love how these 2 are trying to find their way back to one another after such a horrible tragedy.
Date: May 16, 2008 08:47 pm Title: I Still See You There
"Damn it Daniels." I could not agree more!
Date: May 16, 2008 08:19 pm Title: I Still See You There
I think I'm really liking where this is going. I love the old video of them with William. It's sweet and still incredibly heart breaking.
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 07:54 pm Title: I Still See You There
Still here, PamPongChamp. Still keeping up with this heart-breaking fic. Excellent job.
Date: May 16, 2008 05:26 pm Title: I Still See You There
This is really great, bit sad but great.