8 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 04:23 pm Title: A life of tea - in five stages
I really like the idea of tea shown in different stages of Pam's life. We got glimpses of her past, present and future with the common thread of the act of drinking tea at those certain moments. Great, great idea! The first one made me sad, the second hopeful, the third happy, the fourth a big sigh, and the fifth and last one was bittersweet. This was a great story!
One thing though: there were a few minor typos/spelling mistakes.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 05:56 am Title: A life of tea - in five stages
Tjis was so beautiful. Part five especially made me cry.
I'm just a little confused, though- what was it that she found in the closet at the end?
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for saying such sweet things - it's the tea pot that she finds at the end, sorry to make that so unclear :)
Date: April 09, 2008 06:38 pm Title: A life of tea - in five stages
There is a beautiful symmetry and imagery here that I really love. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad that people seemed to enjoy it. Not to mention authors that drew me to this place in the first place ;)
Date: April 09, 2008 05:21 pm Title: A life of tea - in five stages
That was nice. Good work!
Author's Response: aww - thanks. I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: April 09, 2008 04:35 pm Title: A life of tea - in five stages
You've created some really nice images here. Welcome to the archive!
Author's Response: Thank you, I actually quite like it, mother hen style. So grateful that you liked it. rnrnAnd thanks for the welcome. It's really nice to be here - not to mention all the stories that I have missed just waiting to be read :)
Date: April 09, 2008 02:40 pm Title: A life of tea - in five stages
This was so poetic and absolutely beautiful. wonderful job
and welcome to MTT!! :o)
Author's Response: Aww thank you - you made me blush. rnrnAnd thanks for the welcome as well, can't wait to sort through all the great stories that are here at MTT :)
Date: April 09, 2008 10:43 am Title: A life of tea - in five stages
This is very nice - you've done an amazing job in very few words! I really liked that the teal teapot is always there, but you don't beat the reader over the head with it. Just a quick nitpick - I think you meant four o'clock, not four a clock.
This was a very nice debut!
Author's Response: oh thank you *takes just a little bow*. I really appreciate the nitpicking, haven't done this in such a long time :) Thank you again