9 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 04:24 pm Title: Unbind
I really like how you managed to use few words and still managed convey the feelings and images across! The longing look Jim gave Pam in "The Secret" was one that I remembered so reading this made me happy because now, it's a normal thing for him to see her with her hair down. My favorite line is, "Not unusual, but different this time when she is real and the dreams of yesterday are nothing but hidden memories in the corner of his mind." Needless to say, I loved this.
8 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2008 02:13 pm Title: Unbind
Wow. The first one just made me smile. So cute, and so them. Wow. I love them!
Oh Jim. We know you love her any time, any place, but trust me, we women have to spend at least a bit of time pretending to get ready (of course, I say this in my stinky, sweaty exercise clothes, with dirty hair that I didn't brush. So apparently, I fail at that)
So sweet. I loved it.
Date: April 11, 2008 10:04 pm Title: Unbind
great imagery...I really liked it :)
7 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 10:26 am Title: Unbind
Very interesting, I loved the imagry with the colors in the first section. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm actually most pleased with that section. It just flowed easier me thinks ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 08:34 am Title: Unbind
I liked it. Sweet and simple. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you, I'm so glad that you liked it :D
8 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 08:22 am Title: Unbind
Really enjoyed the imagery of this.
Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it, the imagery is actually whay I had the hardest part getting just right - so yeah really, really glad you liked it.